SE: Please tone it down a hair

[KaplanHomahru]

I'm interested in DELIVERY and PROPER form of what is said.
If you ask a stranger the time, he won't tell you the story of how the first clock was invented and what society feels about them. THAT'S bad writing.
Leaving aside how shallow everything said by that NPC was, and not to mention long and uninteresting, its mostly IRRELEVANT and impossible to BELIEVE that someone would talk that much and let alone do it without being interrupted.

We are trying to stop his doomsday plot from eventually destroying our world/way of life ... we are not asking a stranger for the time. That is why he has a little bit more to say...you sound really bad lol