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  1. 12-25-2012 04:14 PM #11
    Alzelia
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    Thank you for the translations! While don't speak a word of Japanese, I do believe I have some simple advice for your translations. You have a tendency to type in run-on sentences. You should split many of your sentences up. Each sentence should communicate just one thought. Below is a really quick example of one of these run-on sentences and how you could split it up.

    Quote Originally Posted by Reinheart View Post
    Could be, but previous broadcast they had they the guys on the show wanted to test out how much a core2 duo laptop can handle FFXIV so was thinking it was more on that, but if they showed the benchmark for it, that would be cool for sure
    Quote Originally Posted by Reinheart View Post
    It could be. In a previous broadcast, the guys on the show wanted to test out how a core2 duo laptop would handle FFXIV. So, I was thinking it was more on that. but if they showed the benchmark, that would be cool for sure!
    I tutored English and writing for freshmen and sophomores in college.
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    Last edited by Alzelia; 12-25-2012 at 04:23 PM.
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