The Negative Impact of Poor Character Writing on the Quality of Dawntrail's MSQ

[Tethan]

Thank you for posting this here as well.

I think a big issue it that communicating exactly what is wrong with the writing other than "MSQ bad", "Wuk bad" is that it is..... just a lot of work. Anyone with a decent grasp on media analysis could rip this story to smithereens, but it would take like a 10-15k word essay to truly do it justice, probably more, so thank you for putting in some of that work.

I expect in the coming months/years we will see hour long video essays on youtube picking apart exactly what went wrong here, like it happened with Starfield. Or at least I hope so, since then something entertaining would have come off it.