I was hitting text limit in my previous post. >_>; At the risk of being further pedantic by commenting on anything more line-by-line, this is my current version amended with the help of your versions:
Wandering, I lie
Too weary and I'm
too lost to the ice for saving
My sins cling, binding me
Eyes fill(ed) with tears
Her song in my ears
Broken, faded; how long I have waited to open my eyes
Turn the light on, know my name
Won't you turn the light on? (Turn the light on)
Turn the light on, you know my name
have to turn the light on (Turn the light on)
Turn the light on, can't connect
'til I turn the light on (turn the light on)
In solace, far away we look
Oblivion!
Falling too far
Feel the fear and it breaks me
A voice from the past
claims that there is no end
Now a slave to my fate
I bow down to my weakness
again and again and again and again, and I'm-
Falling too fast
Let the ground overtake me
A voice from the past echoes on like a drum
Now there's no more goodbyes
Though my heart is still aching
I'll open my eyes one more time, one more time
Reason resigned
Dark seasons design
Spring's promise of sun is honored
with winter's weight down on us
Visions in white
Bold fury in flight
Clear as diamond
Yet fragile as always
My heart is freezing
Turn the light on, know my name
Won't you turn the light on? (Turn the light on)
Turn the light on, you know my name
have to turn the light on (Turn the light on)
Turn the light on, can't connect
'til I turn the light on (turn the light on)
In solace, far away we look
Oblivion!
Falling too far
Feel the fealty embrace me
A voice from the past
claims again there's no end
Now enslaved to my fate
I fall down to my weakness
again and again and again and again and I'm-
Falling too fast
Let the folly now break me
A voice from the past echoes on like a drum
Now there's no more goodbyes
And I'm tired of waiting
I'll open my eyes one last time
one more time, one more time


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