Dragoons: A Rotation Reborn

[Andrens]

hi guys I wanna ask your opinion on my pre t9-BiS, mostly I like to make my own BiS without looking as ready-BiS in the internet.
I think we'll be able to beat t9 in a month from now.
http://ffxiv.ariyala.com/MTD8
basically this BiS is with the Novus (44crit/31det) I manage to get:

564 Strength
544 Critical hit (!!)
307 Determination
505 Accuracy (can always switch the Astrum hands with HA hands for more acc for t9)
428 S. Speed


now this BiS is based on the Novus, which WILL take a while to make, but I think I'll get it before downing t9 (not even talking about being lucky enough for HA)
opinions?

How come you are building CRIT?
Isn't DET almost double then CRIT in terms of stats weight?