English Translation Terrible.

[Ssuusshhii]

But to change どうしたの？ "What is wrong?" to "is ought amiss" is kinda infuriating.

I don't think recently finishing Year One Japanese at your local college gives you the understanding of the processes and philosophies behind translations.

[Amberyl]

I don't think recently finishing Year One Japanese at your local college gives you the understanding of the processes and philosophies behind translations.

This.

That's a perfectly valid translation allowing for characterization.