Feedback: Dawntrail MSQ thoughts

[Palladiamors]

I don't hate Wuk Lamar, I hate the way she is crowbarred into everything. This is a step above Tumblr level fanfiction terms of writing an OC.

[GrizzlyTank]

I don't hate Wuk Lamar, I hate the way she is crowbarred into everything. This is a step above Tumblr level fanfiction terms of writing an OC.

Yeah. In HW Alphinaud was the focus, but Ysaile and Estinien were major supporting cast. SB Lyse was the MC but again Major supporting cast through Alphinaud, Alisaie, Gozetsu, Hien.
ShB it was largely split across Ryne, Ardbert, Alphinaud, Graha. and EW again major cast...

DT it's simply waaaaay too much focus on Wuk. To such a degree that i personally don't want to dislike the character but pretty much becomes forced to.

The first half of DT should have put more emphasis on all 4 of the claimants and better fleshed out why Bakool was such a pos and why Zoraal would completely snap, then the 2nd part put the focus on Erenville and Krile. But no, we got one minor zone as a breather from Wuk.