Can still tell it's a work in-progress, but not too bad for a start. Some stuff you definitely want to explain for them like how gearing works, why the job resource looks like it'd take forever and a day to build up and the manticore form can only be activated at such an insanely low health threshold with what seems to be a fairly unimpressive bonus to it (25% to "all stats" usually means 25% to key stats).

Also just an FYI, tank 3-bar Limit Break is 90% damage reduction last I checked, and feel free to use anything you want from the thread in the sig below.