One aspect of the story that really irked me was the ultimately disappointing experience of meeting Krile's parents, Robor and Alayla. Once they showed up, they were presented without any real sense of mystery or intrigue, and their introduction felt like a letdown.
Despite their ties to the hyper-advanced organization Preservation, they came across as just a pair of ordinary Lalafell. As one of the original possessors of the relic, I expected them to have some significant insights, yet they could barely tell us anything about it. Even the earring they left with Krile required a plot device, Gulool Ja, to be opened which felt downplayed their gift even further.
When they said their farewells, I found myself not caring much about their departure, just because how badly written the whole thing was.
In contrast, consider a brief interaction with Temulun, the elderly leader of the Mol tribe in Stormblood:
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[The group heads out of the yurt. Temulun calls to the Warrior of Light.]
Temulun: You, wait. I would have words.
Temulun: A singular radiance. Shimmering. Like a jewel of the Dusk Mother, blinding in its brilliance.
Temulun: Stars flicker and flock to you. Before such gathered light, even the secrets of the gods may be laid bare.
Temulun: Some are fated to rise in grace and glory. Others to falter and fade, though not from memory. Both will be your strength and salvation come the end.
Temulun: Cherish the stars and the light they bring you in the dark. For you are a traveler, are you not?
Ishikawa managed to imbue Temulun with a sense of wisdom and depth even though her role is nowhere near as big as Krile's parents. She still managed to leave a lasting impression that makes you want to know more about her. In contrast, Robor and Alayla were written by Hiroi without any such impact, failing to live up to the expectations of their supposed intellect and importance.