Quote Originally Posted by Dogempire View Post
She needs an actual character arc, I can see they at least attempted it when she had trouble with boats, had a false bravado, and was pretty naive in the beginning, but her biggest issue is both the fact that she never overcomes any actual, tangible problems, and that she shows no interest in us besides "Hey buddy, thanks for helping me out" and the game makes us follow her around.
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It's baby's first fiction. That's really the only explanation - so much is derivative that it reads like someone in high school writing their first papers. Hasn't quite developed a personal style just yet, no original ideas.

Folks like that can cut their teeth on writing side quests, not the main scenario. Lady who wrote Shadowbringers needs to take the reins back and maybe mentor some of the new folks a little more.