Quote Originally Posted by jameseoakes View Post
Given the change of writer it feels really strange they were allowed to let there OC just crush every scene and drive out every character
It's such a blatant Mary Sue character, if it's so obvious now, how bad did the script look before it went through revisions? Normally I wait until I complete a story to give a full critique and I'm not through the entire expansion yet, but this is just so bad. This whole thing sounds like something I'd find on Wattpad.