My 2 cents: weird plot contrivances where all over EW for some reason
- Suddenly calling off the body swap is weird. Just make one of the good guys stop it somehow.
- GrahaBurgerTime coming just before the final in a forced break felt weird to me. Have it in actual downtime. Either after the final battle OR just write it so that there is a small part where we think we are done saving the world.
- No interaction in the past! That's what they said... then immediately it gets hacked by EmmetYourBoy even though OtherAscian(TM) should have seen that coming
It's like the writers forgot they can plan before and also go back to an older part and change it. #FirstDraftEW