While XIV does have the best story for an mmo out there, my biggest gripe is the storytelling. While the story didn't fail - it also didn't achieve anything in particular. Like ok, this happened but it didn't change how I view anything in this world that XIV has presented except to continue on with the idea that the scions are a mary sue.
Like HW challenged the ideas of xenophobia, classism. SB presented war, revenge, redemption. ShB challeneged what it meant to be a WoL, a play on the concept of light and dark (well ... as best as they could >.>). EW ...
I don't know if writers changed or if it was impossible to go back and edit things between the writers and the dev team, but it read like a YA novel on KU at some points.
An expansion that bases its writing on 80% exposition and denouement when the world is literally supposed to be ending is ???
When I reploayed on my alt, IIRC, there's a point where we've gotten the deal to take Ragnorak, Thavnair has just been through the gutter, and Y'shtola and the scions are like "let's go get some take out in Sharlayan" (girl what).
Once you hit the major climax/rising action/plotlines in a story you don't just downgrade the action. It's sort of an insult to the reader/player when that happens. Don't filler me when we're literally about to be badass.
There were no stakes at all, no real major decisions to create any type of conflict. And where there was conflict, it was easily solved when it could have created real world consequences. Imagine if the Forum said no the scions ? Imagine if Tataru suggested that the scions steal the Ragnorak knowing they'd face major consequences on return. Or they don't steal it and make a deal with Fandaniel/Zenos to get them to the edge of the universe (subplot here to even get to know Zenos more than the beloved 1D he is).
The message for EW could have been a way to ask the player "You need to save the world. You are the only one who can. If given a set of choices with equally disastrous consequences amongst them, which one would you take ?
Instead we got mary sue and I'm just