Quote Originally Posted by AmpelioB View Post
Why are you so fixated on that? is it the only way you think a game can convey "urgency" to you?
because you know, in a story, like a book, if you convey urgency, the reader cant just decide to have coffee because the author writes its urgent... so they are morally obliged to sit and read through instead of putting the book down.

that and "author inserts" like its a witty term. because this isnt a novel, these "inserts" are needed so the player is not subjected to a wall of text placing things in the world. Plus, I feel he is using the term incorrectly OP are you meaning a self insert? in that case, wait until the event, where you will see a fantasy world character created to be like Yoshi P. That is a self insert, or author insert, where an author inserts themself into a fantasy world.

so... if you wouldnt mind, elucidate on your often used term "author insert" and what you mean by it. which of the many story writers do you consider these characters to be? or are you simply using it as a term for characters you dislike? since it is early in your journey and you use it often, it would be good to clarify this for your readers.