So, if I'm looking at this correctly: You made Embrace more clunky, fairy skills cost SCH MP, brought back Rouse, Virus, and HW Cleric Stance, and gave them Collective Unconsciousness.

The best part of the fairy is that it costs the SCH 0 MP after it's summoned. Removing that removes one of the best parts of the SCH. Moving Fey's Blessing down is, honestly, fine, but SCH's problem with the fairy is that it's passive healing is so strong at lower levels, SCH never needs to heal. I mean, if you made it so that Embrace behaved more like the Regens of the other jobs, fine, it brings SCH more in line with the other healers, but then you're removing the pet aspect from the job.