Critiques for the remaining (I'm gonna try and not be too critical this time >x> )
Female
5. Adeline Urusa: Very nice costume and use of extras. It's an overall cute picture and idea. However, if the name below didn't say you were Garnet, I would have thought you were the Lala playing Eiko, she is outshining you! D:
6. Sakuraya Kai': Nice costume, scenery, pose, and us of extra. My only critiques is that compared to the 5 above you, this one is a little dull. Maybe a little more interaction with your extra? (Not too much though).
7. Miki Hoshi: Nice pose and expression. And I can tell who you're dress as. However, for a more dynamic picture, I think you shouldn't have been so centered and straight-forward with the camera. Also, I know the judges love the extra lighting from the Sun minion but I think it's a little too harsh in this picture.
8. Sangriah V': I haven't seen that many episodes of Star Trek to know this character but judging by the pictures I found on google, your costume seems sound (maybe you could have gone for a more honey-colored hair, but that's nit-picking). Your pose and expression are interesting but the picture is kind of boring... >x>()
9. Overlord Rikkuustrife: Great cosplay and use of skin, However, you aren't doing anything! D: The outfit is wearing you when you should be wearing the outfit.
10. Eirwen Mackenzie: I'm sorry Eirwen but were outshined by Xev here. If I didn't see the name at the bottom, I would have thought you were Laura Craft. D: Still, nice body angles.
11. Iris Dawnshard: A very cute cosplay (although I see it a lot on Lalas). I only wish we were closer to you and that you weren't so centered in this picture. As it is, it looks like just a screenshot to me. D:
Male
5. Ronin Woofcub: Nice use of class skills and expression. My only critique is that I wish we had better lighting on you, you're kind of fading into the background a little, and that you weren't so centered.
6. Sienna Moonlux: Nice angles and use of class skills. Your costume is a smidge off with hair color though. Also, I think this is a lost opportunity, not using a Blizzard spell. Blizzard II and Freeze can both be used freely, without the need of a target.
7. Marik Destiel: Your posing is nice and your outfit is as IRL as we can get in this game but I can't help but feel that this was a wasted opportunity for a more bleaker and/or darker setting. Maybe a more darker place in the forest would have been better?
8. Adam Fylrmyn: You're outfit is okay but your hair doesn't do the character justice (pun intended). The lighting is nice and you are doing the character iconic pose, however, this picture is a bit boring compared to the others above it. Some humor from the series this is from might have helped it.
9. Aiden Weaver: I'm sorry but I can't tell what is going on here and I love Bob's Burgers. D: I guess your costume is as good as it could get, without being able to get a shorter skirt. And your lighting is antiquity... >A>()
10. Jinx Fireboot: I'm sorry but you're blending way too much into the background in this picture. D:
I know I say that people are "too centered" in pictures a lot but asymmetry is always a great way to make a picture more dynamic and to make the eye dance.


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