I'm also going to give my thoughts on the remaining pictures
Women
5. Miki Hoshi: I like your setting, lighting, and posing but the picture quality looks a little pixelated.
6. Kaiyoko Star: I like the lighting and the idea of the shot but with how you're position there's a little bit of an unbalance to the picture.
7. Lowena Fae: I like the lighting, the action, and how close we are to you but I when I first saw you this, I almost couldn't tell which faction you were representing. Also, expressions are your friend.
8. Sakuraya Kai: I like the posing and your angle but the lighting needs work and I wish we were closer to you, there's too much useless space.
9. Adeline Urusa: I like the lighting and almost-monotone colors but I wish we were closer to you. I also think you're a bit too centered.
10. Sangriah V': The lighting is nice and I like the use of extras but you don't shine in this picture. The guy standing next to you has more presence then you do... >A>()
11. Ferah Isis: The background is kind of nice and I like your expression but I wish you were facing the camera more, both face and body. Also, the setting is kind of dull.
12. Overlord Rikkustrife: The posing is nice but the picture feels kind of mundane. It's kind of like the first screenshot everyone takes of their character, a low angel, body slightly turned, with their weapon drawn.
Men
5. Epsilon Ion: Your angles, lighting and posing are great. The only reason this didn't make my top four is the background is a little to busy.
6. Ronin Woofcub: I like your posing, expression, and your angles. The only issue I had was that I couldn't really tell what faction you were (I'm guessing maybe Immortal Flame because of the setting).
7. Rho Bhigs: I like the lighting, posing, and expression but I wish you weren't to centered in this picture. I also wish there was a little more Immortal Flames in this picture.
8. Sera Alaric: I like the story here, along with your posing and lighting, but I wish we were closer to you, when I first looked at this picture, I thought you were the Hyur to the left. >x>()
9. Marik Destiel: Your posing and lighting are nice but I wish you shined more. The two extras are a bit to equal with you, when this should be your picture.
10. Fate Lhas: Nice location and posing but I wish the lighting was better, your face is a little lost in the background.
11. Adam Fylrmyn: It's not bad but it doesn't stand out amongst the rest to me. >A>()
12. Jinx Fireboot: Similar to Overlord Rikkustrife, this feels like a screenshot versus a picture. >A>()