Well made! It's very succinct and very informative for non-players. If you have time, you should make a series with this first video being a general intro, then focus on different aspects in each new video.

An idea: If you are trying to convert former players especially, I would also be sure to emphasis past problems that are now fixed (and how). For example, you mentioned very quickly that all the zones are new. I would go into how ver 1 had huge zones which while nice in some ways, forced the whole copy-pasta problem and how ARR will break them into many zones, resulting in much more variety. You can show these maps with some alpha footage of zoning between parts of Gridania, etc.