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    KINDERGARTEN LOVE 101.

    Bastok, trust me when I say this: I am not one to brag. I hate bragging, I think it stunts development, same with unnecessary praise.

    I am in AP English as a Freshman. "University material," my butt. Not even Einstein would be able to decipher your "writing." Not because it's so AMAZING WOW YOUR THINKING IS OUT OF THIS WORLD. Bastok, you have a terrible understanding of grammar and that's that. Your writing does not make any sense, and it is physically painful to read it most of the time.

    I will write you a short love story or something of the like, if you so please, and I will show you what I am capable of and what a decent piece of work looks like. I'm not trying to brag. I'm trying to help because you might just possibly have a sliver of potential underneath all that ego.

    tl;dr: Bastok, your writing sucks and you don't understand grammar very well. I am willing to teach you to write better if you want to. But drop the ego, man. Egos stunt development.

    (honestly I think Bastok needs Grammar 101)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarlia View Post
    KINDERGARTEN LOVE 101.

    Bastok, trust me when I say this: I am not one to brag. I hate bragging, I think it stunts development, same with unnecessary praise.

    I am in AP English as a Freshman. "University material," my butt. Not even Einstein would be able to decipher your "writing." Not because it's so AMAZING WOW YOUR THINKING IS OUT OF THIS WORLD. Bastok, you have a terrible understanding of grammar and that's that. Your writing does not make any sense, and it is physically painful to read it most of the time.

    I will write you a short love story or something of the like, if you so please, and I will show you what I am capable of and what a decent piece of work looks like. I'm not trying to brag. I'm trying to help because you might just possibly have a sliver of potential underneath all that ego.

    tl;dr: Bastok, your writing sucks and you don't understand grammar very well. I am willing to teach you to write better if you want to. But drop the ego, man. Egos stunt development.

    (honestly I think Bastok needs Grammar 101)
    "Singing" You love me. you wanna kiss me and hold me.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M4B3iRD-bD0

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...nvuyK6ur8&NR=1
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    ...whaaaaaat??

    Context clues, Bastok.

    If you're implying that I'm infatuated with you, you are sadly mistaken, dear boy.

    Context. Clues. Please, for the love of god.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarlia View Post
    ...whaaaaaat??

    Context clues, Bastok.

    If you're implying that I'm infatuated with you, you are sadly mistaken, dear boy.

    Context. Clues. Please, for the love of god.
    You said your gonna write a "LOve story" to me. did you not? see I caught you in your own words. haha hmm I wonder if you can do some Voice-overs. How is your voice these days? can you Act?

    Bastok
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    ...dude. Are you really so thick-headed? I'm not even answering. Read my post again. If it were anyone else, I would love to do some voice-overs, but you make me physically angry with most of your posts.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarlia View Post
    ...dude. Are you really so thick-headed? I'm not even answering. Read my post again. If it were anyone else, I would love to do some voice-overs, but you make me physically angry with most of your posts.
    All I'm getting from them is a dysfunctional affection for Bastok...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarlia View Post
    ...dude. Are you really so thick-headed? I'm not even answering. Read my post again. If it were anyone else, I would love to do some voice-overs, but you make me physically angry with most of your posts.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarlia View Post
    ...dude. Are you really so thick-headed? I'm not even answering. Read my post again. If it were anyone else, I would love to do some voice-overs, but you make me physically angry with most of your posts.
    Hmm well i am just typing words. Maybe you get mad at words. Not me. lol or your abusive yourself. haha You can tell
    a lot in someone writing in what they do or maynot do. Well your char looks similar to Devine's and maybe your voice will match her attitude. I will have a little of the story, however this part of the story just takes a whole lot of time.

    So for that matter i hope to get this to you by Sunday maybe if I ever get to sit down and work. i am doing a favor for my friend out of town, so had to re-install a system over here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bastok_Iamtheone View Post
    Hmm well i am just typing words. Maybe you get mad at words. Not me. lol or your abusive yourself. haha You can tell
    a lot in someone writing in what they do or maynot do. Well your char looks similar to Devine's and maybe your voice will match her attitude. I will have a little of the story, however this part of the story just takes a whole lot of time.

    So for that matter i hope to get this to you by Sunday maybe if I ever get to sit down and work. i am doing a favor for my friend out of town, so had to re-install a system over here.

    Bastok
    To Tarlia: (My weak attempt at translating)

    You are just angry with Bastok's words... words he typed. You are abusing yourself. (Blurb about him or his writing/film).
    So... when are you available to do the voice overs, even though you explicitly said you would not do it for Bastok.
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