FFXiv Love Story W/lia - The One

[Bastok_Iamtheone]

See what I mean?

"Actually I said "University Material" better check that again."

[Macha]

Yes maam you may what would you like on This DVD-menus? I can add some things but not much
A P.o. Box would be appropriate unless you would want this delivered somewhere else.

Bastok

>_O Whoever said I was a ma'am?!

Hmmm! well!!!!

Can you put this music on:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8TshU_nGZA

With a CG heart spinning in the foreground, and a flashing checker pattern background and with some bonus features. Like, the script, the voice acting, concept art and videos of the chick. Maybe some videos of Elvis doing "Jailhouse Rock"...


and... I want in big, neon pink cursive letters across the top with a baby yellow outline: "The Love Story of Bastok Iamtheone: FANTASY IS THE ONLY OPTION... and then there was love"

tell me what you think! Thanks~

EDIT: OH OH! Can you please add in a block buster logo?!

[Rhylee_Mau]

See what I mean?

He obviously didn't.

[Velhart]

"Now, now hold your temper. I apoligized but im not all that good at that see, i uh dont do good at those things. I just dont. lol"

I forgot to tell you that I was requested a "Prologue", of this LOve story. I do now realize that people cannot comprehend university material. So i must make amends with my cranium and go to your level of thinking and try to get you to understand what bores me to say a introduction of Kindergarten Love 101


In that "Prologue" I will decipher and break down and try to afford FRaps, that is what I used. However it was the uh outdated version. So i will buy this and try to mend those ideas and get you to understand this story....However, I require realism, and I will have to use real names and non-characterized drama. I dont like that fake usage of dialogue and I am really angry that i must turn this Silent Movie, into a production. I often ask myself why? I should but do this, but the challenge seems to offend me enough to try and create such a production. So I thought of a cast. Now I need to film people who I dont know or ask permission too.

This will take a week in filming alone. I know that it must be done. So who is going to be brave enough to be in a Film : FFXiV Love Story {Prologue}

Bastok

Can I have this video on DVD to show to a college professor and see what he thinks? This is a true work of art. The camera angles were top notch and while you saw no face of the character, you just knew....just knew how he was feeling. Never before has something this artistic hit me so hard.

You sir, are a true work of art.

[Masamune1004]

He obviously didn't.

Yep, and it just makes it even more hilarious considering how much "smarter" he is than all of us.

[Bastok_Iamtheone]

Too deep for me

Actually this is just the top layer.............lol

[Bastok_Iamtheone]

>_O Whoever said I was a ma'am?!

Hmmm! well!!!!

Can you put this music on:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8TshU_nGZA

With a CG heart spinning in the foreground, and a flashing checker pattern background and with some bonus features. Like, the script, the voice acting, concept art and videos of the chick. Maybe some videos of Elvis doing "Jailhouse Rock"...


and... I want in big, neon pink cursive letters across the top with a baby yellow outline: "The Love Story of Bastok Iamtheone: FANTASY IS THE ONLY OPTION... and then there was love"

tell me what you think! Thanks~

EDIT: OH OH! Can you please add in a block buster logo?!

that doesn' sound hard. Why Pink? Photoshop the Blockbuster Logo? lol okay and you want this in the Menus of the DVD.

How does Elvis tie into this? lol

[Bastok_Iamtheone]

He obviously didn't.

your confusing hm, he is checking if the level is College or University. Let''s see work your magick Masamune1004, go on

Confuse the people of your Logic......

Bastok

[Bastok_Iamtheone]

Can I have this video on DVD to show to a college professor and see what he thinks? This is a true work of art. The camera angles were top notch and while you saw no face of the character, you just knew....just knew how he was feeling. Never before has something this artistic hit me so hard.

You sir, are a true work of art.

Okay, how can i get Critism, and apllaudience for this at the same time. Hmmm okay another Dvd, sent to whom? Where?

I better get a www., something. I didnt know how far this could go....

Bastok

[Tarlia]

KINDERGARTEN LOVE 101.

Bastok, trust me when I say this: I am not one to brag. I hate bragging, I think it stunts development, same with unnecessary praise.

I am in AP English as a Freshman. "University material," my butt. Not even Einstein would be able to decipher your "writing." Not because it's so AMAZING WOW YOUR THINKING IS OUT OF THIS WORLD. Bastok, you have a terrible understanding of grammar and that's that. Your writing does not make any sense, and it is physically painful to read it most of the time.

I will write you a short love story or something of the like, if you so please, and I will show you what I am capable of and what a decent piece of work looks like. I'm not trying to brag. I'm trying to help because you might just possibly have a sliver of potential underneath all that ego.

tl;dr: Bastok, your writing sucks and you don't understand grammar very well. I am willing to teach you to write better if you want to. But drop the ego, man. Egos stunt development.

(honestly I think Bastok needs Grammar 101)