Let's hear your VA talent!

[Baldur]

In my opinion your narration sounds better than the original, but it sounded a bit too generic, like the sound of an old man you would normally hear in trailers for western RPGs. I suggest to make the voice sound a little younger and more smooth, if that makes sense. If I can find a reference of a similar voice I'll show you.

I want to make a narration myself, but for some reason my voice sounds much deeper in audio devices than it does in real life, so my narration would sound worse. :-/.

Edit: Corrected spelling mistakes.