Are we still talking about the Arcadion? It's been a solid month since I touched the final arc, and I had wondered if my feelings on the writing would soften over time. But I don't think they have.
I think I'll just quote myself from Bsky, because everything I said then is still how I feel now.
I think the Arcadion story might be one of the worst raid questlines they've ever done.
Don't even know where to begin with how badly they botched it, but I'll start with what I feel is the least contentious flaw: The fighters' ages.
At the very start, the idea that fighters retire at 20—implicitly declaring everyone we fight is 19 at most—was roundly mocked as ridiculous. Because it is.
But between Dancing Green, Deep Blue, Vamp Fatale, and the Tyrant? It's a total farce.
Shetona and Eldite are both known for their long prepubescence. It breaks this contrivance's credibility to insist that all four of these obvious adults are actually late teens.
This is especially true for the Tyrant, who was allegedly a veteran hunter prior to joining.
There's more to say about this, but moving on for now.
The way the final arc of this story goes out of its way to redeem the President is not only extremely cheesy, it exasperates the age nonsense and retroactively undermines the previous arcs.
You see, the President was a public figure until three years ago, when he discovered the existence of psychonekrosis.
The research in Origenics, previously implied to predate the Arcadion's feral soul use, is really HIS research. Including the existence of the second cure.
This causes all manner of problems. There's no way any of the current fighters could meet him—indeed most didn't—without having been prepubescent when they joined the Arcadion.
Dancing Green is low key implied to have been 14-15 AT MOST when he caught the president's eye.
But this also means soulshifting can't have been around for more than 7 years at most. Any longer than that, and the discovery of psychonekrosis being three years old would be absurd.
Despite all the "cultural cornerstone" hype, soulshifting was really just a passing fad.
And the immortalized fighters? You can count them on two, maybe three hands—including Eutrope.
Speaking of, she went into hiding after discovering the president's files, but had no idea about the 2nd cure at all... despite the president being the source of her information.
What point was there in redacting that information in case somebody found out? Why leave the part where she needs to murder someone for their soul? It's as if the president's goal was to drive her into desperation—flying in the face of the president's supposed benevolence.
Worse, Tyrant states that the Heavyweight fighters knew "a long while" about the President's plans. Even the guy whose gimmick is that he's too dumb to keep a secret was in on it. The "they want to kill you for your soul!" thing was kayfabe.
Eutrope wasn't in on it. Why?
Why was traumatizing Eutrope and driving her to murder part of the plan? Why was exploiting Hector's loyalty without letting him know the truth part of the plan? Why was endangering any of these teens for three years instead of, idk, SACRIFICING HIMSELF part of the plan?
At its core the Arcadion was a story about the exploitation of the native people of Yyasulani by the uncaring institutions of colonialism, and about young people on the fringes of society being taken by an industry that pretends to care for them while bleeding them dry.
The decision to rebrand the president a venerable, fatherly figure to the kids he was gathering for his explicitly lethal bloodsport completely turns this message on its head, painting their exploitation as not only well-intentioned, but ultimately for their own good.
Likewise, the president's antagonistic actions towards the Tritails sisters and the WoL are transformed from malevolent to paternalistic—like being punished by your father because you stole a candy bar.
Aside from the racism, there's a throughline of sexism there as well.
Aside from Hector, who was goaded into an irreversible transformation (WHICH IT STILL IS—check the cutscenes!), every single person targeted by the president for stepping out of line was a teenage girl—Yaana via forced knockout, Neyuni and Eutrope via kidnapping.
And when everything is settled, what's next?
Everyone goes back to fighting in the lethal bloodsport. But now because soul usage has been removed, they don't have any safety nets.
They're probably not going to kill each other. And soul usage went beyond "unnatural"...
... but would it have killed them to take a second out of glazing the president to come up with anything here?
Even Dancing Green is back! His arc was about quitting because his persona and training was figuratively killing him! It wasn't the soul usage that bothered him!
None of this is to say I didn't enjoy parts of this story. Even in the 3rd arc, I was wholeheartedly enjoying the fights, the music, and the characters (aside from the president).
But aside from being good at nailing emotional highs, this finale completely shat the bed.
Like, I hate being negative about something that I loved so much in the first act, but I don't think they could've done a worse job at finishing this storyline if they tried.