I'll take HiirNoivl's post and analyse the dialog, since people still don't seem to be getting the point...
Garlemald owes you a great debt, adventurer. Wholly without our prompting, you have now felled the primals of both fire and wind. Such ability and devotion commands even mine own respect.
Hey you beat ifrit and garuda!
You would do well to see reality for what it truly is─cold, cruel, unforgiving. No words could do justice to the great deeds that I have done, nor the countless hardships I have endured in their doing.
Nothing of interest is said in this paragraph.
Corpses litter the fields and choke the streets, and still your gods remain silent─utterly indifferent. Such gods are not fit for worship. As they gaze impassively upon our corpses, so let us gaze upon theirs. The gods are dead to us─we have no need of them.
Nothing of interest is said in this paragraph.
So please, by all means, persist. Struggle to your heart's content. Struggle however you see fit. Struggle long. Struggle oft. And when at last you tire of struggling...summon up your courage and struggle some more!
"Keep at it". And nothing else is said in this paragraph.
For with every act of defiance, another drop of Eorzea's lifeblood shall be given over to the red moon. The crystals, the land, the primals─the power of all shall burn bright and shine down upon this realm a glorious purifying light!
I'm not sure if he's just babbling some more or there's actual meaning to this.
(And this isn't even the end of the text)
Bottom line: SE needs to be concise and to stop adorning empty spaces with bells and whistles. Specially when they end up as five paragraphs of no content.
Those "old english" fanboys can have their cake, but please do it on dialog that's actually relevant... and when writing it, SE, ask yourself "would a person give a speech to a stranger in a conversation? would the stranger stand there and listen for 10 minutes while the other one speaks nothing of interest?"
If the answer is no, then don't write it. It makes no sense.