How would you improve Dawntrail's writing?

[OliverQ]

I'd either make it a Garlemald expansion and ignore Turali entirely with a writing style more like ShB, or I'd get rid of the contest to become Dawnservant, and instead help Krile uncover the Golden City, leading us to a new shard where would then have to help them restore the shard like the First.

[TemporalFruitsAndVeggies]

I'd either make it a Garlemald expansion and ignore Turali entirely with a writing style more like ShB, or I'd get rid of the contest to become Dawnservant, and instead help Krile uncover the Golden City, leading us to a new shard where would then have to help them restore the shard like the First.

Please god, no. If this game goes back to Garlean anything, I'm going full "Escape -> Would you like to skip this cinematic -> Yes" for the whole expansion. Zenos in particular was peak "hey, it's bring your kid to work day, and my 8-year-old son designed an antagonist."

[Mawlzy]

Please god, no. If this game goes back to Garlean anything, I'm going full "Escape -> Would you like to skip this cinematic -> Yes" for the whole expansion. Zenos in particular was peak "hey, it's bring your kid to work day, and my 8-year-old son designed an antagonist."

Yeah we spent more than enough time wandering around a grey landscape under a grey sky with grey people all obscured by white noise snow. The writing of Zenos and Fandaniel was reminiscent of a Scooby Doo staff writer who didn't understand the assignment.