You guys do realize we are in the New World... For Wuk Lamat.
You guys are saying you don't like the focus around the central character who is the whole reason we're there in the first place.
Specially for those of you claiming the arrogance of Writing 101.
An unestablished character with no development so called.
Is being established and developed before your very eyes.
You guys don't even question the necessity of having all the scions along.
What further development are characters with 10 years of development supposed to have exactly?
The Twins should have stayed in Garlemald. There is no reason for them to be here.
Y'shtola up until the invasion should have stayed wherever she was.
The only cardinal sin - was Graha staying behind on our "next adventure" the thing he wanted to do with us.
Kriles catharsis is softlocked to the ending but it's not as though it wasn't getting its proper focus.
Esitinien always plays the JRPG role of Strong character who joins your party at the end which admittedly this time was baited too long so his reintroduction was shortlived.
Thancred and Urianger are focused enough plenty as is Koana - They are the opposing team. i.e. we're not supposed to see them.
And the only reason to see them is to allow you to know more about Koana while at the same time soft hint he's gonna be more of a good guy than a bad guy.
Erenville and his unexplained angst. That's the only thing that isn't really explored or explained.
So what's the character we're supposed to focus on and develop otherwise?
Which is the one?
Zarool Ja? Why? outside Wuk Lamats sibling relationship there's not much there to explore - he's a complete stoic.
Bakool Jaja? The giant 10 ft lizard equivalent of Gary Oak (with a penchant for kidnapping and releasing powerful demigods)
But like seriously where was the focus supposed to be other than Wuk Lamat. Your literal and physical - Call to adventure. Unlike other central figures your Aymerics, your Lyse/Hien, Crystal Exarch (while being a call to adventure is relegated to the crystal tower)/Ryne,
Most of the Scions arcs, Are done. They are 10 years of complete characters by now.
What's there to learn?
Better yet when wasn't Wuk Lamat supposed to be there? It's not during the Succession Contest, how are you supposed to write a story of a character coming into their own, if you relegate them to the background.
Like seriously imagine the corrination ceremony where we spent a quest collecting firewood with Alphinaud.
Or if the story focused more on Krile the whole time.
"I'm here because of my Granddad, Boy I sure hope I can find out more about my Granddad; Do you think this Earing makes me look cute? It was from my Granddad, You know I'm hoping we can find out more about my Grandad, Nobody seems to know anything about my Grandad or this earing how sadge amirite?"
Again Krile is a very mature fully formed individual and her questions are brought up at the right times to the right people like a rational adult. You're on a quest to help Wuk Lamat.
But apparently having her as the central focus makes no sense to some of you.
I can properly think of where Wuk Lamats character doesn't really work.
And that's post killing Zarool Ja. Once we got to go to the "Golden City aka Unlost city aka Living Memory" to defeat Sphene to stop all this craziness once and for all. Wuk Lamat didn't need to be there.
Unlike Zarool Ja, this isn't a family affair. If Wuklamat doesn't appear then Yshtola whose whole goal post scions is to explore the many different shards and worlds makes more sense... And I don't even like Yshtola. Bringing along a strong guy like Estinien makes sense also.
Wuk Lamat at the end. Zero sense.
But other than that which is what. 10 or 11 quests. Wuk Lamat's presence throughout the story was completely warranted. Maybe Erenville could have been written better to bounce off as a character or understand why he's being such a angsty fussy bun-bun the whole time, but as soon as Koana starts getting developed as a character, Erenville's whole gravitas as Wuk Lamat's straight man (comedic term) disappears. Hell we don't even really get a reaction from him when Wuk Lamat gets kidnapped in fact I think he mosey on ahead to the next zone. Like wtf was his problem? But that's not Wuk Lamats fault that happened. It's the writers fault for leaving a thread and then doing nothing with it the whole expansion.
Like the most unangsty Erenville is - is about 5 minutes into Shaaloni before he's angsty again... then when the dome goes down genuinely being concerned <- widest range of emotion shown... followed by being angsty again. Both immediately suspecting his mother is dead (can't remember her name that's how forgettable she was) exacerbates things by lying, then Erenville has like a twilight zone moment where he discovers "oh my gawd... My Mother IS DEAD!?" Like he was the first one to suspect anything his mother gaslights him into thinking it's a robot being piloted at a distance.
So if anything Erenville is the poorly written character for this expansion especially since he took on the narration role.
Wuk Lamat brought us there to help her become Dawnservant for her peoples sake.
If you compare that to Lyse whom we are with the whole time, For one thing, Lyse herself is a completely unestablished character with no development, the girl has been pretending to be her dead sister for years. I don't know who Lyse is. I know who Yda was... or who Lyse pretending to be Yda was.
Then is thrust into a leadership position, then as the stakes are at their highest we knee-capped it for an excursion into fantasy Japan to help them stop the evil foreigners (boy I wonder what era of fantasy Japan... This is supposed to be) Matthew C. Perry told them they couldn't be an isolationist country. So we help Japanese Aymeric (Hien) relight the banners of Gondor and save his people from the clutches of the evil Westerners so he can help us do a Pearl Harbor in Ala Mhigo later. This results in Lyse becoming the leader of Ala Mhigo a role thrust upon her she's not prepared for. She doesn't learn any lessons and most of the time is complaining to disillusioned and desperate people that they can't give up! Because Garlemald is bad!
(And I liked Stormblood and Lyse, Yall are making me look at this stuff the most mean-spirited way because you're not giving Wuk Lamat a chance, At least Wuk Lamat wanted to become Dawnservant, She's not smart but she understands the consequences of what can happen if other people become the Dawnservant, which would ruin her Father's legacy.)
Our major villains in Stormblood are a dominatrix who doesn't get development until 4.x (almost kills my favorite character from the whole expansion Gosetsu)
And Zenos whom at the time and many still do consider him to be one of the worst villains we've had of all time (these aren't even my sentiments of the story - But I pay attention to what fans complain about)
Sigh* TL;DR
So like again I don't really know how it be better to sideline the main character of the story. It's like being annoyed with Prince Caspian in the Narnia classic. "Prince Caspian" because he's taking the spotlight away from the Pevensie siblings

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