Quote Originally Posted by Eien713 View Post
I get what you're trying to say, but it still looks off to me. Unnatural. The shadows in the picture make it feel like she's sucking in her cheeks or something. Or maybe trying to do a failed duck-face? I dunno, it's like the shadows shouldn't meet her upper lip at the point where they do. And the corners of her mouth have light on them when they feel like they shouldn't.
There's certainly nothing wrong with feeling that way, especially after seeing her another way for so long. It may look like she's sucking in her cheeks because that's the same area where her face slopes sharply inward.



I see what you mean about the little illuminated dots in the corners of the mouth. Perhaps there's an issue with the geometry there that's catching the light in a weird way?