The Negative Impact of Poor Character Writing on the Quality of Dawntrail's MSQ

[ThorneDynasty]

That kidnapping scene was so hilariously badly done that I just have to laugh at it. WE COULD SEE THE TOWN FROM WHERE WE WERE STANDING. We knew there were bandits in the area and no one went with her? At that point Wuk had fought much , much worse than bandits, hadn't we literally already polished off Skyruin there?

This is entry level writing at best and that might be a stretch. Maybe don't give the reins of your story heavy RPG to a novice fanfiction writer, yea?

Not only that, WoL has been multiple times been implied to be traumatized by witnessing that "assassination" of Nanamo. She should be hyper-protective of Wuk Lamat. And the camera has the fucking gall to zoom in on our face as she watches another young heiress wander off alone with a suspicious stranger - Is that doubt we are supposed to interpret on her face? No. The game makes you wait around doing fucking nothing three times before the thought hits our character's head that the contender for one of the largest empires in the world maybe might be a target.