Quote Originally Posted by Ryaduera View Post
I'm going to be sick...

The scene after she succeeds with Koana coming into your ream reads like a bad fanfic where Self Insert OC Do Not Steal has their brother check on the actual canonical MC to confirm feelings of closeness. I mean the line is literally "You have become someone irreplaceable to her. As her brother, I acknowledge that with no little jealousy"

That reads like a child wrote it about their OC falling in love with Harry Potter, or WoL in this case, and it's actually gross and I want to scrub myself down to the BONE after feeling that absolute excrement poured onto me as the player. Absolutely vile... I wouldn't even want a replacement for her. I'd rather she go and leave me healthier for it, the cancerous lump she has turned out to be.

I'm not normally this harsh but damn that was bad
I just ran through this bit of the story and the same flashing lights were interupting my brain from actually consuming this scene the way the writer hoped I would. I love romance angles to stories at the best and worst of times and this scene would have been perfectly acceptable had Wuk Lamat had any ground to stand on to have earned this. Up until this point, the story has done a fantastic job of shoving Wuk Lamat down my throat with no prep, no consent, no warning. Just, accept this and like this. It's the natural order of things.

Don't get me started on being asked to call her Llama Tea. I just answered with "..." and Krile continues the Dawntrail gaslighting in claiming I am simply caught off guard with the request and of course we would all be honoured to be considered Eorzean cousins. If I was isekai'd right now, with my WoL just entering the new zone with Erenville, I would jump at the opportunity to lose the entire gang, find Estinen and make my way back to Eorzea and hopefully sleep the whole thing off.