I don't see a problem with the voice. It fits perfectly and I like it.

The people saying "poor voice acting" have probably not heard poor voice acting before like I have. I watched some Star Trek fan films once and they were just emotionless, reading slowly from a script and it was hard to watch. That was when I realized all the actors I see professionally hired on TV are actually very good. It's no different here. The actors SE hires are very good at what they do.

I don't understand how this is 22 pages.