Quote Originally Posted by Caddo View Post
I mean, this is just the harsh reality of things.

If you can explain something using less words, do it. No need to be long winded.

I'll even give an example.

Proper: Yesterday I went to the store and bought some milk. While I was there, I also bought some eggs since they were on sale.

Proper but.. long winded: Yesterday I took a shower and decided I would go to the store. I dried myself off, got dressed and started preparing to leave. After a few minutes, I arrived at the store and made my way inside. Once I got inside I went to the cold section and picked up some milk. While I was over there, I noticed they had a sale going for eggs. I thought to myself "I am running low on eggs" and decided to buy some.
can even cut it down more.

Yesterday I bought some milk and eggs.
or
Yesterday I bought some shit.