@Shougun out of 4 replies, you are the only person to not say shut up and color (2 people....one of which didn't have to reply...their logic not mine), and another that has decided I need to have story flow explained to me.

Thank you Shougun for realizing this was simply a suggestion and did not require a jerk reply, I salute you.

The rest of you need a chill and take a second to realize how you are sounding to others before posting.