(btw all this is from the whm i vid linked earlier)
-play style difference comment-
I do not use swfitcast stoneskin, I prefer to have it for the first holy, if the tank is a derp this saves me headaches. a swiftcast holy is also a DPS+ when you can weave asszie and say tere without clipping, of course what free ocgd you use depends on situation.
Aero III could been used sooner, best is timing it when you know the tank should hit the monster with shield lob, even after it was hit you where just going into cleric, it was kinda slow
You dropped cleric too fast, this is where you can gauge how well your tank can do. I leave them completely off healing then bene when they are low. This tells me how well they can keep up and how well regens and such sustain them later. You really want to do this with wars esp since war is the biggest skill gap when it comes to who is high maintenance or not.
I liked the second pull much better. though there is def room for an aero I or 2 if you had cleric on before the pull.
Boss pull I see the same pattern, slow aero III, you can cast that as the tank is pulling to have it land after they tag it. Can do aero III> aero II> aero I, then take cleric off and do whatever ocgd is fitting for the situation, or use fluild aura, then take it off and be ready with regen and tere.
When the big aoe hit, you should know there is no general follow up with that, the blm could been healed with the medica II regen effect or tossing a regen on top of that if you are nervous.
If you have a caster, inform them to LB the pull after the second boss, as it will be ready by the second wave on lava scorp.
You other 3 members knew what they where doing gg
I am going to assume the rest follows the same pattern and this should be enough to think about.
After the first holy can aero III or some filler because that is a longer lasting stun. I do not tend to regen first but more as filler to fill in during the stun gaps.
asszise could been used as ogcd during the swiftcast recast to free up clipping and overkill. Your teammates where also way better then KisaiTenshi's