WHM Dun Scaith Rotation

[winsock]

Hello everyone, I just wanted to share the rotation I use for Dun Scaith. Any feedback about how it can be improved is very welcome!

Here it is:
swiftcast -> Raise -> PoM -> SoS -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise -> Raise

EDIT

Some really good feedback from you guys! I'll list some of the highlights here to save people the trouble of reading the whole thread:

should also include a /p "Ballad pls!" in there somewhere

^ this is a very good point. A macro could be made to do this.
Since it is a text macro, it can be used while casting, so I would recommending adding a sound effect to the end and relentlessly spamming it throughout the entire rotation.
This will establish dominance over your party's bard.

Also missing Healer LB3, followed by "Accept Raise"...