Jinrya your first photo is well you know, second is much better but the one thing that would make it look a lot better is figure out how to make your 2D drawings not look so 2D. It makes them appears stiff, it is a problem I have as well so I recognize the error. It is one of the reasons I don't draw much plus my drawings only look good about 25% of the time and I have to be drawing something while looking at it. I got a great imagination I just have a really hard animating it and putting it on paper. I will stick with words lol.

By the way I am currently watching Xam'd, catching up on some of my Netflix Anime. Actually if you like zombies a must see is High School of the Dead. It is zombie survival done by Japanese that delivers really well and has some Ecchi goodness in it.