I have some minor issues with your rotations.
You seem to very much understand the class, and the guide is pretty fantastic.

However!
Your use of weaving off-GCD skills with GCD skills is poor.
Especially Swiftcast. See page 4.

[SwiftCast] -> [Med II] - 2.5 second gap doing nothing > [Cure]
You're wasting 1 off-gcd.

I wouldn't advise using PoM & DS together unless you're a particularly undergeared character facing specific mechanics like; T4 Dreadnaught, T9 Favour.

And finally your DPS rotation isn't optimal nor decent. (Sorry)
Page 4 - you have a good concept for your rotation, but you're wasting a lot of resources if DPS is the goal.

Try this:

[DS] [Regen] off-gcd [Cleric Stance] + [Swiftcast] + [Holy] Off-gcd [PoM] [Holy]*9,000

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Your guide is good, and I'm sorry if I'm being rude for criticising inappropriately.
If my comments didn't make sense I'd be more than happy to draw them up in Photoshop/simple infographic.