A Storyteller’s Point of View on Final Fantasy XIV

[Jojoya]

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You are still failing to grasp what we are trying to explain to you.

What you're doing is equivalent to picking up The Fellowship of the Ring, reading the first couple of pages to see they're making preparations for Bilbo's and Frodo's birthday party and deciding that all of The Lore of the Rings is about hobbit birthdays. You're choosing to ignore all the subtle references to darker things occurring outside the Shire and the troubling nature of Bilbo's ring.

You can keep picking apart the introductory chapter to your heart's content but it's not accomplishing anything. You're holding yourself back from the real story.

Yep, you'll notice OP doesn't really respond to anyone, just keeps trucking along with their commentary. I'm impressed that people have tried to respond to specific issues the OP has mentioned when it's clear OP doesn't care.

Because the idea of getting his opinion about the story once he completed seemed interesting at first. I enjoy seeing the reactions of other players.

All he's done is convince me that I never want to read whatever he's written because he lacks an engaging writing style. He's far too dry, stale and technical.

Maybe the forum trolls will keep him entertained. Could someone send FireMage in here to wave a parse in his face?