My main point isn't to say he's angry, but what things make him so. Rules of writing are to make your characters sympathetic - relatable through their reasoning and actions. What makes him human.
The traits you just listed are extremely one dimensional. He's bored and I'm bored. Being highly intelligent, bored, or obsessed doesn't equal amazing character writing.
I imagine if we did find one thing Zenos cared about, something that completely changed his directive for battle, he'd becoming so much more in-depth.
ahhh, but this is just my own frustration with Zenos. He can be so much more, and at this point of his writing I agree that he needs to be gone if he isn't going to evolve past what he is.




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