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    Robin Icebrand
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    Midgardsormr
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    Alchemist Lv 80
    Here's my updated version from what all of you have been saying, as well as some of my own edits after having this on repeat at work. I think most of this is actually accurate, too (which I'm often hesitant to say!). The fourth verse was probably the one that developed the most, and actually helped me out with other verses, too, since the song uses so many similes in it for imagery. Anything italicized are lines that I'm most unsure of.

    One brings shadow, one brings light
    Two-toned echoes tumbling through time
    Threescore wasted, ten cast aside
    Four-fold knowing, no end in sight

    One brings shadow, one brings light
    Two-toned echoes tumbling through time
    Threescore wasted, ten cast aside
    Four-fold knowing, no end in sight

    I remember, being locked in silence
    A surrender, a solemn reverie
    Of drifting, down in the twilight
    Ascending, through faded memories

    No more printed, a work is worthless
    As a madman, is writing on the wall
    Whoever sent this, descent to madness

    Come and save us, yet just before we fall...

    Riding home...
    Riding home...
    Dying hope...
    Hold onto hope...

    Like broken angels, wingless, cast from heaven's gaze
    (Our slumb'ring dead ??? )
    We can find we're falling, falling, far from grace
    (Now take us where I can breathe)
    I'm like a message in a bottle, cast to sea
    (Displaced and torn by the sea)
    Unto their end, our candle's burn, until we're free

    In monochrome melodies
    Our tears are painted in red
    (Bringing me to the edge...)
    Deep inside, we're nothing more than scions and sinners
    In the rain, to light our dullest vague hope!

    Yes, time circles endlessly
    The hands of fate trained ahead
    (Coming to the edge...)
    All things change, dragged through the flame to rise from the ashes
    To begin, we first must see the end fall!

    One brings shadow, one brings light
    Two-toned echoes tumbling through time
    Threescore wasted, ten cast aside
    Four-fold knowing, no end in sight

    One brings shadow, one brings light
    Two-toned echoes tumbling through time
    Threescore wasted, ten cast aside
    Four-fold knowing, no end in sight

    Like the victims, we cast the first stone
    In our cages, we know not what we do
    Indecision, here at the crossroads
    Recognition, tomorrow's come to soon

    Or the bloodied, like lambs to slaughter
    At the mercy, of those who drive the sword
    As the storm rends, it underwater
    We're forgotten, for now and evermore

    Riding home...
    Riding home...
    Dying hope...
    Hold onto hope...

    Without a compass, wand'ring, lost in lies of fate
    (Fate subtly resting above)
    Are we alive and fighting death's amber embrace?
    (Our hearts beat on unafraid)
    On hands and knees, we pray to gods we've never seen
    (Come, shadow, come far from me)
    The final hour upon us, no more time to grieve

    In monochrome melodies
    Our tears are painted in red
    (Bringing me to the edge...)
    Deep inside, we're nothing more than scions and sinners
    In the rain, to light our dullest vague hope!

    Yes, time circles endlessly
    The hands of fate trained ahead
    (Coming to the edge...)
    All things change, dragged to the flame to rise from the ashes
    To begin, we first must see the end fall!
    (2)
    Last edited by Mysteltain; 08-13-2020 at 05:57 PM.

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