Eorzea's Next Top Model Cycle 4 - Round 2

[AlexionSkylark]

Alexion Skylark - I was able to tell right away who this was, even without reading the title. You've really captured the feel of Jaime! Great use of extras in the background, adding to story and recognition without stealing the limelight. Even if he doesn't use a shield, the prescense of the lion on it is a wonderful extra touch. The reason I rated this in the bottom half of my ranking is because the framing could have been improved on. By changing the 3rd person camera angle to 0, your character could have taken up more of the space in the shot, and with lock on a more dynamic shot achieved.

Hey, thanks for the critique, Wings! Now, this contest is all about learning and improving... I chose to answer this because those points noted struck a memory bone... I was indeed looking very hard for a means to occupy more space of the shot, and didn't learn about the 0 camera angle trick until AFTER I submitted the shot. Imagine my face when I heard about it, and was like "oh wow... REALLY, I can do that? LOLZ". As for the lock-on, I ALSO didn't know you could use while NOT having the character looking at the focus lock-on target (the reason I didn't go with it). So, yea... each week I'm learning new tricks!

My colleague models and Tyriont are being AMAZING to this newcomer here, and every shot will surely be better than the last! Hopefully I'll stick around for a couple more weeks and will have a chance to delight you in a better way, it's been amazing to be a part of this contest! <3 Cheer for meh!