I'm back with critiques for everyone

Male
4. Flare Anderfel: You had the reverse of Adam's problem: You are interesting, while the background is doing nothing. I had to give it to Adam because the threat of being attacked by that Succubus made for a more interesting picture.
5. Jinx Fireboot: Your setting is lovely but you are so tiny in this grandiose picture. The staff does help bring my eye to you but I'm focusing way too much on the staff versus you. I also wish I could see what you're fearfully looking over your shoulder at.
6. Epsil Ion: Your use of Holy as an effect is nice but I don't see what the narrative of this picture is. Also, the angle of your face is awkward. >x>()

Female
4. Adeline Urusa: Interesting pose and lighting and very flattering angles. This picture doesn't have as much of a story to tell as the others but it is visually lovely.
5. Rhaya Relanah: Another picturesque picture versus storytelling. I love the effect you're using and the shadows it's casting on you and I love the movement in your skirt. If only it wasn't for that floating, monster head... >A>()
6. Kaiyoko Star: This isn't a bad picture. Your pose and expression are good. However, I wish you're lighting was better and that we could see more of the Ahriman.