Adeline: The angle is good. Having no expression there really works well. Bravo.
Eirwen: You managed to pull such a great shot with a good background when most people couldn't do so. Nice expression. Good angle.
Rhaya: Dramatic! I think it would've looked better if you were a little further away to the back.

Iris: That's a good shot, would've been my 4th pick. However, it felt a little dead with the color choices and that repetitive facial expression.
Kaiyoko: Flashy. It's looking a little weird that the customers aren't even looking at you when you are screaming for attention. Didn't feel natural at all..
Saku: I like it, I'm not sure on what you could do to improve it, it's a good shot but pretty average as well. What bothers me though is that your pose is not much relative to the expressions/poses the NPCs are making, also there are so many NPCs in the background, It's just not sync'd.
Xev: That customer seems pissed and you're having this big fat grin on you face to piss them off even more? lol.


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Adam: Natural. Funny.
Epsil: Nice coordination. Captured it at the perfect moment, I like the idea and color tones as well. Well done!
Flare: Was a tie between all the remaining, however it felt that you were a little more creative.