And for the remaining:

Male
5. L'yhan Nunh: Your posing, expression, and angles are right but I wish we were zoomed in closer to the action, I would say about a good 1/3 of the picture is dead space.
6. Jinx Fireboot: Nice angles, posing, and lighting. I also like how the foreground is warmly lit and the background is cooler. My only critique is that this picture is a smidge boring, compared to those above it.
7. Flare Anderfel: It's a cute shot but like Jinx's, it's a smidge boring compared to those above it. >x>()
8. Aiden Weaver: Your body angles and lighting are nice but I wish I could see more of your face, particularly, your eyes.
9. Sienna Moonlux: You're posing and expression are good but I think we need to zoom in closer to you, there's a lot of unneeded space here, especially with such a bland background.
10. Adam Fylrmyn: I'm sorry Adam but not only can I not see you but you're kind of being out staged by your companion. >x>()

Female
5. Xev Bellwyn: Nice composition and posing but the angle we're looking at isn't very flattering. If this was IRL, we would be staring up your nose right now. >A>() I also wish you were a tiny smidge more to the right.
6. Eirwen Mackenzie: Your posing and expression help tell a story but I think we should have been closer to you. With how the Rule of Thirds looks like in this picture, I'm staring at the extra in front of you first.
7. Lowena Fae: It's a nice shot but your lighting is a bit too intense, it's almost looks like monster-lighting.
8. Overlord Rikkustrife: You're posing is nice but I just want to grab you and turn towards the camera so I can see more of you. The location is also a bit weird/bland.
9. Miki Hoshi: The pictures okay, the reaching out pose is interesting but I feels the picture is to centered/symmetrical. It doesn't make the eyes move, everything happens just in the middle.
10. Kaiyoko Star: I'm sorry Kaiyoko but I can't tell which one is you. >A>() Also, there is a lot of useless space between all three of you, I wish you were a bit closer together.