A Storyteller’s Point of View on Final Fantasy XIV

I'm sorry what? Why would you link and then judge all of 2.0 if not all the rest of the game based off on an introductory quest line that up to you becoming an emissary would be if Pokémon had a different story starting point based on what your starter Pokémon was. That made its way to facing your first gym leader. While never seeing what the other two openings delt with. The reason why the crystal is blue is a nod to the rest of the Final Fantasy series where if the game has you collecting crystals it's almost always a blue one. I'm going to assume you ignored the obvious not physically seen power up that should have happened soon after picking it up.

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Originally Posted by kindar1

There, the change I make is that Yda and Papalymo show up either as we’re about to lose the fight and save us, or immediately after if we didn’t need saving. They are either impressed we lasted long enough for them to arrive or at our skills. I understand the crystal represents something the way the MSQ is currently setup, but I turn it into a purple one, that evaporates into a burst of smoke to link this to the other incidents.

The cut scene doesn’t need much adjustment, just the end, Yda turns to us and says.

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yeah, you definitely didnt watch it. otherwise, you know know the crystal does have significance, a fair amount of it actually. and is one of those breadcrumbs for later... not that it matters to a story telling "expert"

done with this. good luck in your writing career

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Originally Posted by Boblawblah

Yep, you'll notice OP doesn't really respond to anyone, just keeps trucking along with their commentary. I'm impressed that people have tried to respond to specific issues the OP has mentioned when it's clear OP doesn't care.

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I was wondering how long it would take someone to point this out. Watching this thread the past few days, I don't remember him responding to any criticism on his posts while he kept on posting his "review" or whatever you call this. Red flags abound.

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Originally Posted by Zebraoracle

I was wondering how long it would take someone to point this out. Watching this thread the past few days, I don't remember him responding to any criticism on his posts while he kept on posting his "review" or whatever you call this. Red flags abound.

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At this point we could talk about anything and just ignore his posts. Favorite game of yours? Mine's Vagrant Story.

Mines Wild Guns.

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Originally Posted by Atelier-Bagur

Mines Wild Guns.

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You know I've heard good things about the series and I've not tried it yet. I think I have it on my hacked Vita. I should really give it a go.

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Originally Posted by Renalt

You know I've heard good things about the series and I've not tried it yet. I think I have it on my hacked Vita. I should really give it a go.

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You're probably thinking of something different. Wild Guns is an old snes arcade style shoot' em up game that has fun gameplay and an AMAZING soundtrack!
It got a remastered re-release on consoles that added new stages and characters but yeah I highly recommend you look it up if that genre interests you.

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Originally Posted by Atelier-Bagur

You're probably thinking of something different. Wild Guns is an old snes arcade style shoot' em up game that has fun gameplay and an AMAZING soundtrack!
It got a remastered re-release on consoles that added new stages and characters but yeah I highly recommend you look it up if that genre interests you.

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Oh I was thinking Wild Arms. Didn't Wild Guns get remastered on the Switch?

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Originally Posted by Renalt

At this point we could talk about anything and just ignore his posts. Favorite game of yours? Mine's Vagrant Story.

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I assume 'any way you can' would be the best way to play vagrant story on PC? I never played it back in the day, but it's always been one I thought about trying out.

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Originally Posted by Renalt

Oh I was thinking Wild Arms. Didn't Wild Guns get remastered on the Switch?

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Yup! It's also on PS4, Xbox and Steam

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. I understand the crystal represents something the way the MSQ is currently setup, but I turn it into a purple one, that evaporates into a burst of smoke to link this to the other incidents.

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..and what of the one you find after the sword? Not the one at the Guardian tree. The one before that. The one you didnt mention AT ALL.

Or did you skip THAT cutscene as well?

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The large change I make to support the direction is to play up the Ixal incursion

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There is an entire questline to cover this elsewhere.

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The large change I make to support the direction is to play up the Ixal incursion

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Thats a gear check, reminding new players to check their gear.

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. When it’s over, we find out the brigands had been helping the Ixal

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Um..the Ixal dont trust any Gridanian. Ever.

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Originally Posted by Renalt

At this point we could talk about anything and just ignore his posts. Favorite game of yours? Mine's Vagrant Story.

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That's such a hard freaking question for me...

Several games jump to mind, but it's so hard to pick one

Rimworld
Black & White
Chrono Trigger
Guild Wars 1
Tales of Symphonia
Xenoblade Chronicles

I can't choose, man! D:

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Originally Posted by Zebraoracle

I was wondering how long it would take someone to point this out. Watching this thread the past few days, I don't remember him responding to any criticism on his posts while he kept on posting his "review" or whatever you call this. Red flags abound.

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He said he won't respond to criticism because he is limiting himself to 3 posts per day.

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Originally Posted by PirateRyanG

He said he won't respond to criticism because he is limiting himself to 3 posts per day.

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Ah, that'll do it. Is it a tactic to avoid dealing with criticism, or just an attempt to not spam or play too much of the game? You, the readers, can decide!

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Originally Posted by Zebraoracle

Ah, that'll do it. Is it a tactic to avoid dealing with criticism, or just an attempt to not spam or play too much of the game? You, the readers, can decide!

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He has actually already done these quests. He played it a long time ago. He is writing up his 'notes' and gradually releasing them.

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Originally Posted by PirateRyanG

He has actually already done these quests. He played it a long time ago. He is writing up his 'notes' and gradually releasing them.

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You seem to have a remarkable amount of insight into this other person.

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Originally Posted by Iscah

You seem to have a remarkable amount of insight into this other person.

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It is literally in his first post.

This is his second time through the quests, and he hated it the first time.

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Originally Posted by kindar1

This quest feels deserved. The people involved in it come across as competent, what we do matters, and the stakes feel like they matter too. There is even a ‘twist’ to the story.

The one aspect I think could be improved, is when the author inserts arrive. It would work better for them to come in at the last moment if I’m about to lose the fight, and even arrive just after I’ve won, if I don’t need rescuing.

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I'm going into a troll thread but this is gonna bug me if I say nothing. This is one of those instances where the older quests getting large XP boosts and you being vastly outleveled for this encounter shows and hurts the actual story for it, because when I did this back in 2013, that was exactly what happened. About a third through the fight with the demon, that's when the mysterious stangers come in (Yda and Papalymo for Gridania, Thancred for Ul'dah, and Y'shtola for Limsa) to assist you in the fight. I can go back and do these quests easily now and I laugh with my friends who have played for a while "damn, remember when this was hard?!" because they used to be difficult quests. They're not so much any more because of the fact that so many adjustments have been made to it, you're already sitting at like, lv20 or higher for a level 14 or so quest.

On the topic of "this doesn't feel urgent," I'll also add to the chorus of "that is gameplay mechanics at play" but also, everything in this game happens in a time bubble; if you do the crafting quests from 1-50 there's one that a lot of people went "wtf?!" over when they finished it partway through Heavensward (if you know, you know - no spoilers, just in case here!) because it made zero narrative sense for it to happen like that. However, the devs explained that no, that quest happens around the same time as the final level 50 quests in the vanilla A Realm Reborn and not whenever you're actually finishing the quest in. Everything happens in a specific bubble, and the MSQ happens in its own: anything that happens outside of it is either happening at around the same time, or before/after your important quest that you NEED to do RIGHT NOW. I'm sorry it takes you out of the story, but it's designed like that when you may have to put the game down for a time.

The MSQ is also like that: just because there is a gap between you finishing a quest and the NPC saying "this is very important to do this now" and you taking the next quest where they say "time is of the essence", does not mean that narratively there is also a gap. Same with you actually going and doing the quest! If you have to stop for the night because you need to sleep or whatnot, the arbitrary timer you keep bringing up would time out and then you'd have to... idk, start over or something. That's not fun for anyone. If you look at it more from "these quests are designed to, in a narrative sense, be told to happen in a short timeframe, as a story would have happen in a series of events" it makes it not... however you're seeing it. Another way to look at it: you fall asleep or are getting sleepy while reading a book. You're not to the end of the chapter, but you're getting to a break in the chapter before moving into a different part to continue the story. The end of the break has a character saying "we need to find the killer, time is of the essence." If you pause to put your bookmark in to sleep, or if you're busy and need to go back to work, etc. you're doing what the story is doing: creating a bookmark in real time to come back to. The story picks up exactly where it left off when you pick your book back up to continue to the end of the chapter, picking up with them preparing for what is important to do and going to do it.

This story is not without its flaws, nor is it pristine, no critique needed writing - there are plenty of flaws, but I agree with others that you seem to not be looking at what you do enjoy. I've been writing for a couple of decades now (not professionally, but I was on the track for it if I had kept with it) and what you're focusing on isn't narrative, nor are you really... paying attention? To a lot of story beats. You're a run of the mill adventurer. You're no different than the scores of regular joes coming to the Adventurer's Guild in each of the three City-States trying to make a name for themselves or just help a realm of people who have been dealt a crappy hand in life after the Calamity because you're that kind of good person. You make a name for yourself in doing the MSQ, sure, but the game also assumes you went and did some of the sidequests, making the NPCs talk about you that hey, you've done more than just look for the big jobs to propel yourself into Celebrity Adventurer status, you've helped the little guy. You may have stumbled into some of the bigger things and the NPCs thank you for that, because hey, they needed the extra help and you went above and beyond for nothing than maybe a pat on the back and a thank you, maybe a little coin, but not much more... but the people who are in charge talk, and now people in charge of the City-State know your name. You're not going into this as an already established Warrior of Light, the saviour of the realm and of Carteneau, but someone who is there helping out and is slowly making a name for themselves.

The Sultantree, Lifemend Stump, and the Seasong Grotto introduce characters who are already investigating the very things you're stumbling into, who kind of infodump at you after the scripted fight, or if you already know them from 1.0 you're seeing people you know. 2.0 assumes you do not to be new player friendly, and it's not an "author insert" to have a character who does know more than you at this time. You see them later and you'll hear about them later, but a simple "who is this masked character" moment isn't the author of a story going "I'm just going to insert myself to write some exposition and then off I go like Tuxedo Mask" in this case, it's introducing characters the game writers want you to be curious about. Why did they show up? Why are they here? What do they know that I don't? Characters that look unique compared to the rest of the generalized cast are always going to play a part in the story (happens in plenty of other rpgs, not just XIV here). There aren't any Maechens in this game like there are in FFX, no one really shows up to do one huge lore infodump to pass on information that isn't relevant to the now unless you're a lorehound and want it for your own character's backstory, but there are characters you're introduced to that are part of your character's journey: keeping on with the FFX example, Luzzu and Gatta are introduced early on to you and give you some exposition but then go off to do whatever Luzzu and Gatta do as Luzzu and Gatta things. They pop up on Tidus' journey a lot up until Mushroom Rock, giving you more information about what's going on in the world while you travel with Yuna's summoner party that you haven't heard about because you're kinda busy with... idk, protecting Yuna and making sure she's on her path to defeat Sin. Getting summons. On a completely different path than theirs, but your paths line up, they keep seeing you, and Tidus is that weird kid who got a little too close to Sin and thinks he's from Zanarkand so they tell him things. It's not much different from that in XIV, as word of your deeds reaches these specific NPCs, your deeds are lining up with what they're doing, and they keep running into you. You might not know the driving force behind these characters or what their needs/wants are, but that's followed by a big fat yet.

All in all, I think you're missing the forest for the trees (hah, funny joke with Gridania starting city and all, god I amuse myself) with the story. You're focusing on small plot points that are there to drive the story, yes, but you're only looking at them in the case of that individual quest, not the whole of the story. A gameplay mechanic with the Monoa Mask wherein you can rebuy it if you need to is there for convenience. The Voice of the Just (the Ul'dah quest item for the Ul'dah quest of the same part of the story) shares a model with amethyst earrings, among others, but that doesn't mean they aren't a unique item for what they're used for. The Monoa Mask sharing a model with some low-level masks is the same: it's made from a specific tree, not just a random tree from the Shroud as others may be, but cutting cost when your budget is crap after overhauling an entire mmo is going to happen in the early days. Giving it a black mark for ease of "oh god I dropped this item by mistake what do I do" isn't the story saying "this unique item is not unique like we said it was," it still IS because the story will go on as if you didn't accidentally drop the item and need to reacquire it. Most gameplay mechanics are not a part of the story, they're there for ease. AOEs are not seen by the character (though players like to say "oh, it's because of [story element you haven't gotten info on] we can see what they're doing before they do it!") but by the players for ease of battle.

If you take the time to actually enjoy the forest and not scrutinize each individual tree for not having the amount of branches you think it should, you'll see a lot more than you currently do in terms of story beats, information that has a plot thread that may come up later - you may not remember it, but no one will get mad if you ask "has this been brought up before?" because we can't remember every detail and that's fine! - or even just something that is resolved quickly but gives you requisite information important to the Plot Happening Now and Not Later, character introductions, and will likely enjoy what ARR has a little more. ARR is probably the weakest in storyline, but it also has to a) resolve things that began in 1.0 that some players may have 0 clue into what is going on until relevant plot points are brought up alongside the "you're a random adventurer" narrative until it merges, and b) keep to the "you're a random adventurer who grows in notoriety as they learn about what's actually happening and becomes the saviour of the realm" narrative because you can't just be a Super Saiyan, the build up from Zero to Hero, as Disney's Hercules puts it, is much more interesting than "they can already do all this cool max level stuff" unless that's what the story is about... which, this one is not.

Hope you can eventually enjoy the game's story, even a little.

Probably too late in the thread, but just to point out that Stephen king dumped on stephenie Meyers writing ability, yet she sold well over 100 million books. I’m not a fan of either, but one man’s trash is another’s treasure.

And let’s be honest, the game is successful. Not sure about the reaction vids on YouTube with people crying over the story, but as games go it wasn’t terrible. And that makes it better than any movie in the last ten years.

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Originally Posted by PirateRyanG

It is literally in his first post.

This is his second time through the quests, and he hated it the first time.

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You mean 'YOUR' first post? It's a little odd that almost every post you've ever made is in this very thread.

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Originally Posted by Boblawblah

You mean 'YOUR' first post? It's a little odd that almost every post you've ever made is in this very thread.

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Ah. The Internet and paranoia. Is there any duo more iconic? Alas, you made the statement and people are just going to believe you.

Perhaps you don't believe it is me, but you are just arguing back because I showed you all the information that you need is in the actual thread? You got angry at that, so you got snippy. I understand. I was 14 once too.

But no. It isn't me.

Two reasons why most of my posts are in this thread:

1. I found it funny. As stated, I am also a writer. I came here looking for decent discussion, but nah.

2. I rarely read other threads. I am only up to the start of the second expansion, and I have randomly stumbled across spoilers quite a bit. I know I won't be spoiled in this thread.

And bonus third reason:

I read some of his actual writing, and I found it woeful. I was intrigued as to why he thought his opinion mattered here, so I stuck around.

Also, I am European (British, in fact). This guy is American.

Also, other people have been commenting here more than I. Perhaps you should accuse them of being him too, eh?

Part of the reason why the OP doesn't respond as often is due to how the forum works. You start with a low amount of daily posts and only gain a higher amount with having a higher level character with forum access.

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Originally Posted by Boblawblah

I assume 'any way you can' would be the best way to play vagrant story on PC? I never played it back in the day, but it's always been one I thought about trying out.

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Yeah although some sounds are a little odd when emulated. Other than that it's a totally viable way to play it. Even though it's my favorite game...It's not going to be for everyone. Even I was put off from it the first and even second time I played it. It'll introduce a mechanic and then explain nothing about it. You pretty much just figure things out by trial and error. Once it clicks though...it's so good. Plus the writing is fantastic. So was the camera direction with the cut scenes.

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Originally Posted by Renalt

At this point we could talk about anything and just ignore his posts. Favorite game of yours? Mine's Vagrant Story.

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TWEWY
Pokémon Mystery Dungeons
and Zero Escape: Virtue's last Reward

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Originally Posted by AmpelioB

TWEWY

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I can't say I'm familiar with this one.

I find it interesting that a self-confessed self-published author feels they have the insight to critique the narrative of a game they have barely experienced.

I am sure his works are wonderful reads (!), but here's the thing: This game is 12 years old. Are some of the early areas and quests clunky? Sure. Could they be improved? Probably. However, this game has won numerous plaudits for storytelling and narrative. You have an opinion; that does not make you correct nor your criticism valid.

And just to put things into perspective as of last week this game has 27 million registered users....for a 12-year old game. How many books have you sold?

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Maybe the forum trolls will keep him entertained. Could someone send FireMage in here to wave a parse in his face?

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I mean...TC is definitely a graylet when it comes to story structure competency

Egg over Queasy, Surveying the Damage, and A soldier’s breakfast, I might turn into a supply run for a group in an area cut off from the others. Something simple overall, fighting creatures for their eggs, maybe gather ingredients to make poultices. Things that still matter, but would be performed by members of the militia, if any were available. If I wanted to end on a high note, I’d have the Ixal push forward while we are there, and together, we push them back. In this fight, we aren’t The Hero, we’re just another soldier.

Spirithold Broken
To this one, I do something similar to the Lifemend Stump quest. We aren’t sent directly to Spirithold. This time, the group didn’t show up to… let's say the boat that was to talk them away. The last time they were seen was at the Conjurers in Gridania. From there, we have a series of investigation stops where we finally learn that before they were going to leave, they would go to Spirithold and perform a ceremony.

When we get there, the 1 guard is sleeping standing up. It’s his third shift because there’s no one to replace him. No, he didn’t see anyone come in, but he’s not too proud to admit he’s been nodding on and off for hours how. Has he heard strange sounds from within Spirithold? Laughing, he tells us the creatures in there are always making sounds. So we go in, to be certain.

To be honest, I am tempted to make this a small, one-person dungeon, where we need to find each member of the expedition and then escort them back to the entrance. But even if not, Spirithold needs to be larger, and the people we need to find further in. It ends the same way, with us fighting the golem. But I would make it clearer if we do or don’t notice the masked mage.

Then I have a few small quests. Their goal would be to continue to show how stretched the Gridanian forces are as we do more tasks, ending at the Matron’s Lethe.

In the Grim Darkness of the Forest.
This one changes slightly. Because of the shortage of personnel, Theodore is the only one there, and the only reason he braved the root to get to his post is that the person who was assigned to it had a family emergency, and Theodore wasn’t going to force them to choose between duty and family. He’s terrified of heights, but he does his duty, which is why he spotted a suspicious campfire in the wood at the foot of the root.

That starts an investigation, the clues we bring to the militia leads into the “to Guard a Guardian” quest.

This one I leave mainly untouched. But again, I would time the arrival of Yda and Papalymo depending on how well we fare.

The following quests I leave mainly the same. The changes I’d make are borderline cosmetic instead of something that matters.

So, that’s what my version of the MSQ could look like.

I've seen a lot of Playthrough of Detroit: Become Human and I'm totally determined to play it in like the worst way possible. I'm going to search for the worst possible answer for every situation.

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I've seen a lot of Playthrough of Detroit: Become Human and I'm totally determined to play it in like the worst way possible. I'm going to search for the worst possible answer for every situation.

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I love doing that in games, I'll purposely try to do the worst playthrough, or play in a way the devs really thought no one would, just to see what happens.

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So, that’s what my version of the MSQ could look like.

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But I would make it clearer if we do or don’t notice the masked mage.

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Im going to ask this again

Are you skipping cutscenes.

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Originally Posted by Boblawblah

I love doing that in games, I'll purposely try to do the worst playthrough, or play in a way the devs really thought no one would, just to see what happens.

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I had a lot of fun doing a playthrough of Until Dawn where I made sure ONLY the black guy lives. Keeping Matt alive is the hardest thing cause he has so many things that can trigger his death even if you are playing someone else.

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Originally Posted by Renalt

I can't say I'm familiar with this one.

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The world Ends with you
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikiped...s_With_You.jpg

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Originally Posted by Boblawblah

You mean 'YOUR' first post? It's a little odd that almost every post you've ever made is in this very thread.

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Originally Posted by kindar1

Oh boy, was I entertaining during those 12 hours. And man, did I complain. To hear me talk, you’d think I couldn’t wait for those 12 hours to be done.

Thing is, I kept playing past those. Over 2 weeks, I played something like 36 hours. And a few days ago, I found myself thinking back on that start and the only thing I remembered clearly was being overwhelmed.

And I wondered. Is that why I disliked the start so much? Was there so much of the mechanic of the game I needed to understand that I didn’t notice the good parts? Shouldn’t I give the start of the game a new look?

So, here I am. About to embark on a new play-through to the dismay of the friend who gifted me the game. And I decided to document my thoughts on what I experience.

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ma'am read please

Just watched the rings of power finale, I have to admit, I enjoyed the season! I'm a pretty casual lotr fan though, so no lore purism here.

Never seen anything related to LOTR, but I did finally watch Arcane (ppl on my college esports team were urging me to).

Boy did I both enjoy it and hate myself.

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Just watched the rings of power finale, I have to admit, I enjoyed the season! I'm a pretty casual lotr fan though, so no lore purism here.

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I'm a bit of a Tolkien purist, but still very much on the more casual side. For example, apart from a few scenes in the last movie, the PJ trilogy is a fantastic testament to Tolkien and brought a lot of people over to what's otherwise a very dry book series. Rings of Power is honestly not that bad.

• Galadriel being a Mary Sue is typical Tolkien. It's a foregone conclusion that she'll grow to be one of the strongest and most respected elves in Middle Earth and survive all the things. Showing her journey through what happened is obviously going to show a strong and uber-broken Ñoldor blitz through orcs. She doesn't go through the plot without consequence, she got soft-exiled the first time and got thrown in jail by Míriel. Otherwise, this is a strong and uber-broken Ñoldor, do people really think telling her "No" would actually work?
• Galadriel not being ladylike is fine. Even at her most graceful, passive period, she's still going to be ready for battle and defy perceived authority; that's Tolkien's prose that people expect to translate into a screen, and as it's been shown multiple times, it not always happens. They have to show her in a warrior mindset. Galadriel's always been portrayed as someone polite, but someone you shouldn't cross. I'm not saying Galadriel's necessarily the best I've ever seen, but she does do a good job at showing what a younger, less prudent
• Arondir is fine. 100% fine. People go nuts over there being african american actors playing elves because "omg my Tolkien Norse influences" but even then xD Tolkien's a tree-hugging 30's hippie. Put him in a modern setting and his sensibilities would have him add that with no problem. And then you have the fact that black people likely did traverse all the way up to Scandinavia, especially when travel routes were established by viking explorers. They'd be rare, but they'd be there!
• The timeline being off... okay, some stuff are indeed rather wrong. Some anachronisms I can get, others are really major. Durin for me is something they shouldn't have done; every Durin that's born is considered the reincarnation of Durin I, so having two Durins alive at the same time is really "not"...
• And keeping in mind how they're basically making a series out of the scraps...? This is really well-done for what's worth. They didn't have the liences for the Silmarillion or anything in the Third Age. So them showing an Istari show up so soon? Harfoots being depicted the way they are? Durin's Bane being shown already, even if in a flashback that adds random lore to Mythril? For me that's fine, creative liberties, I'm not gonna be anal about it like Christopher Tolkien would be.
• The Celebrimbor forge of the 3 Elven rings was... pretty poor? It's a major event that needed a bit of gravitas, not glossed over in half an hour xD That's what the series needs to lead up to, imo, it needed a little more.
• Sophia Nomvete is a treasure and Disa is the best addition to anything Tolkien, can we please keep her, Tolkien Estate?
• Twink Elrond's fun. Durin IV is joy. Gil-Galad needs his authority clipped a little, he wouldn't have the power he has in the story.
• Orcs saying "Adar" makes me cringe a little, as it frankly should make them cringe with every mention. Also, I'm sorry Tar-Palantír but your daughter looks nothing like a Míriel. I certainly wouldn't be singing A Elbereth Gilthoniel to her.
• Human Sauron. Hmm. Just... mm. I want to see if they're going to add Annatar, but I'm wondering if they will at all, because "trademark". But if that is the case, then why are we doing a series on the rings of power at all lol xD

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I can respect those points, and to a degree agree with them.

The whole half an hour thing after meeting that specific person for what seems like an afternoon was very rushed feeling lol.

C: "Oh no, we can't do the thing"

H (30 seconds after talking for the first time ever): "Why not try 'x'"?

C: "great idea, let's do that"

I'm surprised H didn't look at the camera and wink with how on the nose it was at that point.

I don't mind though, I'm really just enjoying having a show that's NOT GoT. I'm tired of extreme violence and shock value just for the sake of it. This 'felt' like a Lord of the Rings movie, and that was exactly what I was hoping for.

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But I would make it clearer if we do or don’t notice the masked mage.

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..how can you NOT notice him? His presence has a specific purpose to the entire questline.

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But again, I would time the arrival of Yda and Papalymo depending on how well we fare.

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To what purpose? To achieve what end? They are not "author inserts" either.

I am seriously wondering what you are reading..or if you are actually paying any attention to quest text.