Wow, Wuk Lamat is really single-handedly ruining the DT story...

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Originally Posted by StormChase

Give Yoshi-P a call and read out everything you just said. I'm sure he'll love your feedback.

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Well, feedback isn't necessarily supposed to be pleasant.
First and foremost, it's supposed to show creators what people loved and hated about a product they made. Especially then when it's a product the customer paid for.
Feedback doesn't have to be sugarcoated. And the one who gets it isn't supposed to 'love it' either. The only thing important is, that they use it to better the product they made.

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Originally Posted by honest_psycho

To answer unanswered question: The source of the problem is that the writers are absolute talentless amateurs and need to be replaced asap.

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Originally Posted by sylphlands

Exactly this. Hiroi is a talentless hack, genuinely one of the worst writers I've ever seen. Everything he touches turns to slop. If they don't swap out the writing team soon...I don't even want to think about it actually lol, the patches and DT were painful enough. The thought of the writing quality staying this poor is depressing.

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I'll bite the bullet here and take the potential lashing: I don't think Hiroi and the other new writers are exactly "terrible". While some are new, like the people who did the Myths of the Realm alliance raid story, some have written the smaller side stuff like the Job/Role Quests and some other side quest things. Hiroi for example did the Pandaemonium series and also worked on the Return to Ivalice story and Bozja's story, and I believe also lead 6.1 and 6.2 at the very least for Endwalker's post-patch MSQ.

HOWEVER!...They currently are not MSQ quality writers.

Going from writing non-mandatory side stories/smaller-ish content to writing a story that has to carry a whole expansion/post expansion while also building up something for the future of the whole game is a BIG jump from what they are no doubt use to.

It seems pretty clear based on what has been written in the past by Hiroi and the new writers that the potential IS there. The problem is that he and the other new writing team just isn't ready yet to carry a whole expansion with their writing quality, and it shows given how massively split the Endwalker Post-Patch MSQ and Dawntrail's current MSQ have made players. Yes, Hiroi and the other new writers are only really going to learn through actual experience and trying things out along the way given the story is pretty much a blank slate with small things leftover, but if Yoshi-P, Ishiwaka, and Oda wanted to keep their "We'll just take a backseat and let Hiroi and the new writers do their own thing" approach going forward, then they need to immediately throw that mindset in the dumpster and oversee Hiroi and the new writers more carefully until they can get their footing with what they're putting out.

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Originally Posted by Aniise

Well, feedback isn't necessarily supposed to be pleasant.
First and foremost, it's supposed to show creators what people loved and hated about a product they made. Especially then when it's a product the customer paid for.
Feedback doesn't have to be sugarcoated. And the one who gets it isn't supposed to 'love it' either. The only thing important is, that they use it to better the product they made.

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Game developers aren't usually inclined to listen to feedback that sounds like it came out of Eltingville.

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Originally Posted by ZXN

I'll bite the bullet here and take the potential lashing: I don't think Hiroi and the other new writers are exactly "terrible". While some are new, like the people who did the Myths of the Realm alliance raid story, some have written the smaller side stuff like the Job/Role Quests and some other side quest things. Hiroi for example did the Pandaemonium series and also worked on the Return to Ivalice story and Bozja's story, and I believe also lead 6.1 and 6.2 at the very least for Endwalker's post-patch MSQ.

HOWEVER!...They currently are not MSQ quality writers.

Going from writing non-mandatory side stories/smaller-ish content to writing a story that has to carry a whole expansion/post expansion while also building up something for the future of the whole game is a BIG jump from what they are no doubt use to.

It seems pretty clear based on what has been written in the past by Hiroi and the new writers that the potential IS there. The problem is that he and the other new writing team just isn't ready yet to carry a whole expansion with their writing quality, and it shows given how massively split the Endwalker Post-Patch MSQ and Dawntrail's current MSQ have made players. Yes, Hiroi and the other new writers are only really going to learn through actual experience and trying things out along the way given the story is pretty much a blank slate with small things leftover, but if Yoshi-P, Ishiwaka, and Oda wanted to keep their "We'll just take a backseat and let Hiroi and the new writers do their own thing" approach going forward, then they need to immediately throw that mindset in the dumpster and oversee Hiroi and the new writers more carefully until they can get their footing with what they're putting out.

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My brother in Hydelin, you can't be seriously considering giving these people a second chance.
There are so many blatant problems, even with the foundation of the worldbuiling that you cannot explain this away with in-experience.

To be fair, I wasn't really vibing with the stories of the raids you mentioned, and to be honest, it was side-content I didn't care much for.
I bet if I did an actual deep-dive into those stories, I can identifiy a lot of issues, that culminated in the absolute shitshow of Dawntrails MSQ.

So no, no way in hell I will give these people the benefit of the doubt. They need to go.
I don't care what they do, but I don't want them anywhere near the next MSQ.

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Originally Posted by ZXN

HOWEVER!...They currently are not MSQ quality writers.

Going from writing non-mandatory side stories/smaller-ish content to writing a story that has to carry a whole expansion/post expansion while also building up something for the future of the whole game is a BIG jump from what they are no doubt use to.

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That's fair! I think Hiroi was woefully unprepared to write an entire expansion. I have issues with...most of his writing, unfortunately, except for the SHB caster role quest. That was a random high point for him and I genuinely enjoyed that quest. (I actually found out after the fact that he wrote it, which really shocked me lol.) I had a great time in Pandae even if there were some writing decisions that I thought could have been better.

It makes me wonder why he was chosen to do an entire expac right on the heels of Endwalker, especially with such little experience writing something so big. It seems like an extremely risky move for the team to take.

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Originally Posted by sylphlands

That's fair! I think Hiroi was woefully unprepared to write an entire expansion. I have issues with...most of his writing, unfortunately, except for the SHB caster role quest. That was a random high point for him and I genuinely enjoyed that quest. (I actually found out after the fact that he wrote it, which really shocked me lol.) I had a great time in Pandae even if there were some writing decisions that I thought could have been better.

It makes me wonder why he was chosen to do an entire expac right on the heels of Endwalker, especially with such little experience writing something so big. It seems like an extremely risky move for the team to take.

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They presumably either weren't adequately preparing new talent, or the new talent that they were preparing were assigned to the unnamed project instead of XIV.

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Originally Posted by honest_psycho

My brother in Hydelin, you can't be seriously considering giving these people a second chance.
There are so many blatant problems, even with the foundation of the worldbuiling that you cannot explain this away with in-experience.

To be fair, I wasn't really vibing with the stories of the raids you mentioned, and to be honest, it was side-content I didn't care much for.
I bet if I did an actual deep-dive into those stories, I can identifiy a lot of issues, that culminated in the absolute shitshow of Dawntrails MSQ.

So no, no way in hell I will give these people the benefit of the doubt. They need to go.
I don't care what they do, but I don't want them anywhere near the next MSQ.

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Okay...then let's follow your line and go from there, and I'm going to go off the assumption that when you say "they need to go" you mean not fired, because the entire context changes based on that small detail.

They get rid of Hiroi and the current writing team, just like a few players have demanded. What then? What's the next step? Well that would be bringing back the Ishiakawa, Oda, and the previous writing team. Well that seems easy eno-wait...What do you mean they don't want to come back and do the MSQ again? Well alright, next plan: replace Hiroi and the current team with ANOTHER new team. That'll-What do you mean there isn't another team that has been trained and is ready?

What then?

Strong-arm Ishiwaka, Oda, and the old writers and give them the ultimatum of "Either you all do the MSQ story again or you're fired? Attempt to make another new team from scratch, throw them right on the MSQ and hope they don't give the same results? Do you go right for the throat and give Yoshi-P the boot for "not being prepared enough for this situation and making things this way?"

I am not trying to push your buttons, or troll you, or insult you, or make any excuses for the current team when I say what I am saying. Your anger and frustration at the current state of the story is understandable. Trust me: Dawntrail was filled with so many holes even Swiss cheese would be concerned for it and I have pointed out how fucking abysmal the story is. I am also sure Ishiwaka, Oda, and the old writers would absolutely come back if asked or if they felt they had no other choice. But while the anger for quite a few people is currently high on what we got, you also have to genuinely consider the possibility that there simply ISN'T a Plan B, or C, or D and onward that they can fall back on currently.

And as for a "second chance": this feels more like their third to me. Hiroi took over with the Endwalker patch quests, at least 6.1/.2 anyway, and I personally hated the Zero story. So to me: Dawntrail's patch MSQ is their third chance. If they fuck this up then three strikes you're out: into the dumpster.

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Originally Posted by ZXN

But while the anger for quite a few people is currently high on what we got, you also have to genuinely consider the possibility that there simply ISN'T a Plan B, or C, or D and onward that they can fall back on currently.[/B]

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If this is true and they really don't have a plan B than the game is cooked and some higher ups in Squares management have to resin too.

If the current writers are really the only ones available, then they need WAY more oversight.
One of the reasons DT turned out like it did is that Yoshi-P and other important people were leeched to work on FF16, a cheap game-of-thrones-rippoff hiding behind kaijuu spectacle.
That's why he couldn't have a closer look to the writing.

But to be clear, I very much prefer for Hiroi and his colleages to be FIRED.
This much incompetence is unacceptable and need to have consequences.

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Originally Posted by honest_psycho

But to be clear, I very much prefer for Hiroi and his colleages to be FIRED.
This much incompetence is unacceptable and need to have consequences.

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That's the thing. If Hiroi put out some good siqequest stuff, then sure, just toss him back in the sidequest dungeon and never let him back out. But even all his sidequest stuff was mediocre. The fact he was promoted makes me think it's some sort of internal Squaresoft politics where it was essentially "his turn" (I've read that's not uncommon at Japanese workplaces) because Ishikawa was promoted. I don't think he did anything that was universally loved like Ishikawa's Alchemist and Dark Knight quests.

If they don't have someone else to take over for him, and if Ishikawa doesn't wanna come back to do the MSQ, then they desperately need to look externally.

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Originally Posted by lolnotacat

That's the thing. If Hiroi put out some good siqequest stuff, then sure, just toss him back in the sidequest dungeon and never let him back out. But even all his sidequest stuff was mediocre. The fact he was promoted makes me think it's some sort of internal Squaresoft politics where it was essentially "his turn" (I've read that's not uncommon at Japanese workplaces) because Ishikawa was promoted. I don't think he did anything that was universally loved like Ishikawa's Alchemist and Dark Knight quests.

If they don't have someone else to take over for him, and if Ishikawa doesn't wanna come back to do the MSQ, then they desperately need to look externally.

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The Pandæmonium quests are mediocre?