Dawntrail is a good Story but not a Great Story. (SPOILERS)

Dawntrail is a good Story and it is better than Sormblood. It has parts that are great and parts that are bad. Wuk Lamat has a good development and if you pay attantion you see how she grows. Just read and listen to evreything in the MSQ (She is Part of the Dungeons/Trials) and you understand it.

Why is Dawntrail not a great Story?

Because the part with the succession was to short. It should have lead us to Shaaolani to meet Erenvile's Mother and get Keystones there. the 95 Dungeon should have been 97 dungeon and from there on the Start of the Alexandria part with evreything how it went down. It would have had a bigger impact on the story and for the characters.

There are like.. 5 threads right now discussing the MSQ and how the writers did a piss poor job at writing it. I dont think you are gonna find too many who agree with you..

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Originally Posted by Xellith

how the writers did a piss poor job at writing it.

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If you compare it to HW, ShB and EW its not good. If you compare ist to ARR and SB it is good and better.

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Originally Posted by Xellith

There are like.. 5 threads right now discussing the MSQ

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There only should be one thread if people wouldn't be like they are.

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Originally Posted by Xellith

I dont think you are gonna find too many who agree with you..

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I don't realy care. Just want to say how i see the Story.

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Originally Posted by Xellith

There are like.. 5 threads right now discussing the MSQ and how the writers did a piss poor job at writing it. I dont think you are gonna find too many who agree with you..

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Truth be told, the vast majority in those threads got annoyed and skipped some cutscenes, and even those who didn't were so annoyed at the story that they couldn't even tell the basic theme of the narrative.
As OP said, it is not a great story, but all the people freaking out and even trying to say people should read books are being very disingenuous, even more as they praise all other stories XIV had as the pinnacle of gaming writing while it's just a little bit above of what was given to us in Dawntrail.

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Originally Posted by DiaDeem

I read someone somewhere say... "it's a good story that's very poorly written".

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For some parts of the Story its true.

Personally I think it has a boring story thats badly written

Goddamn man I feel sorry for you...The Wuk Lamat tempering got you hard. I guess this is proof that love bombing works for other people I guess.

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Originally Posted by Oizen

Personally I think it has a boring story thats badly written

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Not the story as a whole. Parts of it, yes. Badly written, not entirely. Some parts are too long-winded, others too short. But overall the story is good.

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Originally Posted by OMGJesuis66

Truth be told, the vast majority in those threads got annoyed and skipped some cutscenes, and even those who didn't were so annoyed at the story that they couldn't even tell the basic theme of the narrative.
As OP said, it is not a great story, but all the people freaking out and even trying to say people should read books are being very disingenuous, even more as they praise all other stories XIV had as the pinnacle of gaming writing while it's just a little bit above of what was given to us in Dawntrail.

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So now the argument it's that it's too deep for us plebs to understand?
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Originally Posted by Mnemy

Goddamn man I feel sorry for you...The Wuk Lamat tempering got you hard. I guess this is proof that love bombing works for other people I guess.

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What tempering?