English script grammar has two mistakes in Moogle quest

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'The other think I have the easiest job in the Mogmenders, but they're wrong! Have you ever flapped your wings in place for hours on end? No? Then you have no idea how hungry it makes you, kupo! But I must do my duty, What supplies do you require this time?"

"Flapped your wings in place for hours on end" It should be "in a place". And It's no such way to say "on end", I believe the moogle actually means "No end". "How hungry it makes you, kupo!" I suggest to change as "how hungry it makes me, kupo!"

I believe this script needs to bring up and consider again by the dev team, thank you. Regards

"In place" means in the same spot, "on end" means continuously, non stop. I don't think those are mistakes.

The you is correct as is, as its used to refer to all beings not just the moogle himself.