The story was fine for the most part, but my biggest complaint about the whole thing was the waste of potential and sloppy events from Garlemald and the giant plot holes of Hydaelyns plan.
You're telling me that we have a spaceship (which was most likely built using the help of the Loporrits) and they couldn't have found a way for us to get Garlean air ship tech to help build it? Garlemald had the most advanced air travel BY FAR on the continent. Have you seen the size of their battleships?! One of those babies would have been able to save everyone in one trip! What should have happened is Zenos and Fandaniel went to the moon not by some deus ex machina teleport pad, but they should have had their own spaceship that Fandaniel helped Zenos build (he was the smartest person of the Allagan empire so of course space travel would have been something they knew about since they most likely helped with Dalamud). We could have boarded the ship before they took off and that's how we got to the moon. Look at how fast they built those towers and the "giant laser" of a castle. It would be believable that they could have made a spaceship too. Would have been a better explanation of how Zenos came back from the moon. It should have been a plot point to get the blueprints of their spaceship and some of the tech to help finish our spaceship since even with the help of the Loporrits, Sharlayan couldn't get the engines small enough for the ship since the Loporrits only knew how to create giants ones that could move a planet.
