FFXiv Love Story W/lia - The One

I think these Bastok threads have managed to turn me retarded.
I'm so confused right now.

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Originally Posted by Synfrag

I think they are talking about your writing, it's quite awful sentence structure and grammar. But perhaps you are young and undeveloped in that aspect. Or English is not your native language? Either way I have to agree, I'm confused. You have confused me in game too.

As for the video, props on having the cojones to post it. I was not able to watch it in it's entirety either. Even love stories need a sense of adventure, mood or really anything to capture you audience's attention. I felt it lacked this throughout.

For some critique see below.

Setting I understand if you like the Black Shroud but it is a terrible place to do recording, what you end up with is all the clipping and no emotion due to the lack of sun and lighting. Thanalan would have been a much better choice. Think of any awe inspiring movies you may love and imagine them without the mood lighting, sun positions etc. Did I mention the clipping, it is really bad.

Editing Again looking at proper video production from popular movies, you can usually count at least 3 different transition types depending on the scene. I don't see any transitions here, fades, dissolves, sweeps etc. There is also nothing to create any suspense or climax to the story. Maybe add some black and white footage of you dieing or of the love you seek. Otherwise it is quit emotionless.

Technical Try recording at 1/2 frame. Your system apparently cannot handle full frame 1080 recording. If you have a multi-core system you can assign cores to Fraps or your recording software and to the game to physically split the load. I have no clue what you are editing with but try out some filtering, transitions and effects.

It's more of a personal video that, I myself wouldn't share as it has meaning only to you. You did not convey emotion or really anything through this video which means all it is to others is someone recording some video and putting music to it.

F for effect
C for effort
and an A for bravery posting it here!

I hope some of what I have written here will lead you to try some new things in any future videos. If not all you need do is watch your favorite (Live action) movies for reference. Do not reference animation if you are into that because you do not have control over the environment like they do. Like in real life you have no control over your scene when recording game videos.

Cheers!

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hello Syn,

haha thats your name. okay i gave it some thought. right now there is a girl being made and the progress is going well. I will post the progress

FFXiV Love Story {Prologue}

character development

Character : Devine Landstrom

Country : Limsa Lominsa

Height : Average

Eye Color : Brown

Class : Marauder

charasteristics : she has a scar as FFVIII Squall had.

http://www.screencast.com/t/xMWSiurJP

Devine Landstrom {Marauder} - Limsa Lominsa
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NiiWl0YNaCs

Bastok

Bastok, I told my homeroom, first, second, and third periods about your wonderful DVD and showed them the video, so you're gonna need to mail at least 150 of them pronto.

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Originally Posted by Tarlia

Bastok, I told my homeroom, first, second, and third periods about your wonderful DVD and showed them the video, so you're gonna need to mail at least 150 of them pronto.

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wow thats a number??? I didnt think anybody like it too much so im working on a second one. Well I need the addresses or where to send it

Tell em to Email that to Elvislovepresley77@yahoo.com and if its too many for the email to handle I can give a bussiness number. so tell em that too.

Is uh this a HIghschool its going too?

Bastok

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Originally Posted by Bastok_Iamtheone

charasteristics : she has a scar as FFVIII Squall had.

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MY SIDES.
/10characters

Is it my imagination, or in a lot of his threads does he seem to hit on the females with his replies?

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Originally Posted by Koumoru

Is it my imagination, or in a lot of his threads does he seem to hit on the females with his replies?

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By hit if you mean bash them upside in the head with incomprehensible English, then yes.

this is quite possibly the greatest thing i've ever seen

can you setup a donate page please?

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Originally Posted by Bowen

MY SIDES.
/10characters

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"Right, so this will be Devine Landstrom She is something huh!

A Girl with a Axe gets your attention everytime.....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?
v=IBQQdu5mpIU&feature=player_embedded

Bastok