I mean, there's large-scale ways to fix a problem and there's small-scale ways. Yours kinda rewrites out a huge chunk of the back half of the expansion, but my angle is to look at the things that first Shaaloani trip is supposed to do on a functional level, and try to fix it in the smallest way. Which is:
- Get us away from Tulliyolal so we're too late for the attack,
- Gets us close to where the attack comes from so we still see it (technically optional, but hey, if you can you might as well)
- Introduce us to the region that's then going to be the backdrop for getting to said source of the attack,
- Reintroduce Estinien, if only as an 'also he's here'
- Give us some time with Erenville