Originally Posted by
sylphlands
Agreed - stories written for children still abide by the basic rules of storytelling, and having a child audience doesn't equate to the story being bad. Dawntrail doesn't follow any rules - its main character has no meaningful arc, the conflict is weak, there's no actual climax in the plot (there are multiple almost-climaxes, and they're all poorly done), and the stakes are simultaneously all over the place and yet somehow nonexistent. The tone is very juvenile and conflicts are resolved quickly, which I think is where the point of it feeling like a children's story comes from, but I've seen actual children's stories deliver a moral far more gracefully than DT did.